Another excellent chapter! Thanks for updating so fast, I'm really into this story...
I can already imagine the tortures down the road for Inuyasha and his 'friends': purification, castration, beatings, liquification of body parts, and so on. Death is too good for them. May they be physically and psychologically tortured for a VERY, VERY, long time.
Beatriz (Chapter 2) - Fri 14 May 2010
Hey!I love your story!!!I hope you update soon!:-D. I really want Kagome to take revenge on Inuyasha and those bastards!!!! Poor Kagome. :-(
Wow, I can not tell you how angery I am right now at Inu. I want serious revenge!!!! I must say that the interaction between Seshie and Kagome is interesting and I can't wait to see how you start to bring them together. Great Job.
manderb (Chapter 2) - Thu 13 May 2010
I know i am going to enjoy reading this! cant wait for more, but I guess I have no choice.
TruGemini (Chapter 2) - Thu 13 May 2010
She should purify Inu's ears for that. A small wede at a time. Let's see what Sess is going to do this time.
I'm loving how dark these first couple of chapters have been! It makes the proverbial 'light at the end of the tunnel' that much brighter! I can't wait to find out what Sesshoumaru is doing with Kagome, and what Rin has to do with it! Sesshoumaru doesn't even seem to care what's going on between Inuyasha and Kagome at this point. Update again soon! :)
seriously i hope she never forgives him and that someone cuts his 'boys off' i really hate inuyasha right now.
TruGemini (Chapter 1) - Thu 13 May 2010
Wow...Inu needs to be hanged for that one! You wrote the anger and pain and rage she felt very well. I was impressed as usual.
Sakura (Chapter 1) - Thu 13 May 2010
I love how instead of being completely broken Kagome is mostly angry. I hope she gets her revenge. Killing him is too easy, I say she finds some guys to gang rape him!
Wonder if he'll enjoy that as much as watching someone he's supposed to love being violated!
Excellent! More, please!
omg this has me trembling. i hope they kill him in the worst way possible
Great writing! This is really dark, but real life often is. Even though the subject matter is really depressing, I enjoyed reading it and very much hope you write more.
oksana (Chapter 2) - Thu 13 May 2010
Thats first sotry with Inuyasha gambling i've read. Very interesting, will continue reading for sure.
Wow, I can tell I am going to be on one hell of a ride reading this fic.
Wowza.
What a way to start off! You've got a way with a visceral description that's like a shot in the gut. I hope some serious revenge gets dished out for that kind of violation of trust.
Awesome, awesome start.
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