that was adorable! It really shows how no matter who you are, where you come from, what your upbringing - there isn't anything we wont do for our kids. Getting this insight into Sesshomaru of all people, was nice, and Kagome's reaction - that last line, was very touching as well. As a mother, of a 2 year old, I feel this same way when my husband dorks out for our daughter. It his close to home in a pleasant way.
This was a very sweet drabble, though I will admit that I had to go back a couple of times and re-read it, but I can see Sesshomaru dropping his guard in order to play with his son as Kagome stands back and watches them play. I would hope that Sesshomaru would chill out for his own kids, though one never knows. You did a great job of incorporating one of my favorite books/movies into the IY world.
Mia (Chapter 1) - Thu 29 Jul 2010
*squeals* OH MY GOD! That was soooo cute! ^^ Just picturing Sesshoumaru playing Voldemort with his sonsends me into a fit of giggles.
On a more professional note, you did very well with your description of the little boy, even without naming him.
Great Idea and Great Execution of said idea.
Kerii (Chapter 1) - Sun 04 Jul 2010
That was so cute and amusing. I am still giggling. Good job!
Sesshoumaru as Lord Voldemort? *dies* A very funny idea, and I think you set quite a nice tone with this one - you didn't even name the kid, yet I find I adore him already. Just a side note, though, you misspelt Inuyasha in your disclaimer!
Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Thu 20 May 2010
This was a very cute little read. Well done.
Too cute, hehe ^^
Very short, yet very sweet. I want to point out that you do have some punctuation problems, but I have no doubt that it will improve over time as you write more fanfiction. Congrats on a great little fic!
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