Reviews for Unwritten by Michelle

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Thoughtful confusion (Chapter 4) - Tue 11 Oct 2011

Hooh, interesting! What does the mysterious 'worthless-at-the-time' pendant have with anything to do? WHAT will Kagome wear!?? xP

I'm looking forward to future chapters. ^::^


Creature of Shadow (Chapter 4) - Wed 14 Jul 2010

I liked! This is the first 1st person story I have actually read through, cuz for some reason that normally bugs me, but I like this one! And I can definitely see pieces of your personality here. At least, from what I have seen of you thus far. Like the food mentions that were frequent. Lol. I liked it though!

 

CoS


Gabrielle (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Jul 2010

You Need To Update!!

:D Funny and I like where it's going.


Gabrielle (Chapter 2) - Fri 09 Jul 2010

omg hahaha I love the end of this chapter. To even think Sesshomaru would say the word "douche" makes me laugh.


Karli (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

Well i read it. Its a good story mate and i hope you keep up the great work.

I have a few questions but they will be  answered in any future chapters so i wont ask.

Anyway good work mate


NAO-chan33 (Chapter 4) - Fri 11 Jun 2010

hahahaha, I really enjoyed reading this chapter.  :D  Her phone conversation with Sesshoumaru was very funny.  lol  Well, keep up the great work!  Can't wait until the next one!

 

--nao-chan


Jordan (Chapter 4) - Thu 10 Jun 2010

hi well you know who it is it was great hi this is akward...bye

 


jojo661538 (Chapter 4) - Fri 04 Jun 2010

hehehe poor kagome she needs to calm down anyways great story keep up the great work hope to read more soon ^_^


=] (Chapter 4) - Thu 03 Jun 2010

<3 it!! keep up d good work =] 


NAO-chan33 (Chapter 3) - Wed 21 Apr 2010

I just found this story and I must say, it's very interesting.  :D  I wanna know what Sesshoumaru meant by "watch out for the sheep."  lol  Well, keep up the great work!  Can't wait until the next one!

 

--nao-chan


Dehlia (Chapter 3) - Sun 18 Apr 2010

what the . . . SHEEEEEEEEP!

the heck's that supposed to mean?


Dehlia (Chapter 2) - Sun 18 Apr 2010

Tee hee. Busteeeeeeed.

That's actually not a bad idea, making a fictional book based off your own life. Kagome, I'm stealing your idea!


LadySafire (Chapter 3) - Fri 16 Apr 2010

Oh god, a playful Sesshomaru...Kagome is gonna have  anervous breakdown by the time he is done with her.

great story!


snowbird (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Apr 2010

I say leave it in first person.  You gave a very good justification which I understood.  You've also got me itching to know what you have in store for her with him, past and present.

I, too, am a shower person.


Nilee1 (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Apr 2010

I absolutely adore this story. I think that you nailed it using Kagome's point of view. It keeps us all guessing, especially about modern day Sesshoumaru. Please update soon.


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Apr 2010

Hmmm, muy interesante!  (I just got back from the Dominican.)  So I wonder what's going to happen when Kagome next bumps into the younger Sesshoumaru...  *^_^*


Hesunohana (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Apr 2010

just too funny ! I think I love your fiction and its beginning.


KEdakumi (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Apr 2010

I like the story so far.  The POV works well.  She kinda rants, of course, I guess I would too in the same situation.  It works.  I love the idea of someone calling Sesshouaru a twerp!  Not exactly a word that comes to mind when thinking of him.... I love it!  Can't wait for more!


dragonslave7 (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Apr 2010

I love the story so far. Kagaome's personality is absolutely hilarious!! :) Update soon please!

 

Dragonslave7


knifethrower (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Apr 2010

I enjoyed that nice long chapter.  I love where this story seems to be going!  I wonder what the pendant does...  Can't wait to find out, so please, keep up the great work and update soon!


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