Hooh, interesting! What does the mysterious 'worthless-at-the-time' pendant have with anything to do? WHAT will Kagome wear!?? xP
I'm looking forward to future chapters. ^::^
I liked! This is the first 1st person story I have actually read through, cuz for some reason that normally bugs me, but I like this one! And I can definitely see pieces of your personality here. At least, from what I have seen of you thus far. Like the food mentions that were frequent. Lol. I liked it though!
CoS
You Need To Update!!
:D Funny and I like where it's going.
omg hahaha I love the end of this chapter. To even think Sesshomaru would say the word "douche" makes me laugh.
Karli (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Jun 2010
Well i read it. Its a good story mate and i hope you keep up the great work.
I have a few questions but they will be answered in any future chapters so i wont ask.
Anyway good work mate
NAO-chan33 (Chapter 4) - Fri 11 Jun 2010
hahahaha, I really enjoyed reading this chapter. :D Her phone conversation with Sesshoumaru was very funny. lol Well, keep up the great work! Can't wait until the next one!
--nao-chan
Jordan (Chapter 4) - Thu 10 Jun 2010
hi well you know who it is it was great hi this is akward...bye
jojo661538 (Chapter 4) - Fri 04 Jun 2010
hehehe poor kagome she needs to calm down anyways great story keep up the great work hope to read more soon ^_^
=] (Chapter 4) - Thu 03 Jun 2010
<3 it!! keep up d good work =]
NAO-chan33 (Chapter 3) - Wed 21 Apr 2010
I just found this story and I must say, it's very interesting. :D I wanna know what Sesshoumaru meant by "watch out for the sheep." lol Well, keep up the great work! Can't wait until the next one!
--nao-chan
Dehlia (Chapter 3) - Sun 18 Apr 2010
what the . . . SHEEEEEEEEP!
the heck's that supposed to mean?
Dehlia (Chapter 2) - Sun 18 Apr 2010
Tee hee. Busteeeeeeed.
That's actually not a bad idea, making a fictional book based off your own life. Kagome, I'm stealing your idea!
Oh god, a playful Sesshomaru...Kagome is gonna have anervous breakdown by the time he is done with her.
great story!
I say leave it in first person. You gave a very good justification which I understood. You've also got me itching to know what you have in store for her with him, past and present.
I, too, am a shower person.
Nilee1 (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Apr 2010
I absolutely adore this story. I think that you nailed it using Kagome's point of view. It keeps us all guessing, especially about modern day Sesshoumaru. Please update soon.
Hmmm, muy interesante! (I just got back from the Dominican.) So I wonder what's going to happen when Kagome next bumps into the younger Sesshoumaru... *^_^*
Hesunohana (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Apr 2010
just too funny ! I think I love your fiction and its beginning.
KEdakumi (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Apr 2010
I like the story so far. The POV works well. She kinda rants, of course, I guess I would too in the same situation. It works. I love the idea of someone calling Sesshouaru a twerp! Not exactly a word that comes to mind when thinking of him.... I love it! Can't wait for more!
dragonslave7 (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Apr 2010
I love the story so far. Kagaome's personality is absolutely hilarious!! :) Update soon please!
Dragonslave7
I enjoyed that nice long chapter. I love where this story seems to be going! I wonder what the pendant does... Can't wait to find out, so please, keep up the great work and update soon!
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