i seriously felt this was a rushed job. besides that it was a decent. Grammatical errors here and there, but seeing as this isn't an essay, im sure it doesn't matter.
swift death (Chapter 52) - Sat 22 May 2010
your story nearly broke my heart just from reading it. it was sad and poor kagome did not deserve what the fates had in store for her. sometimes the fates are nothing but asses to those who deserve way better. your story has for some reason been one of my favorite fanficks to read. till next time, and keep up the great job, you wont be hearing from me again till i read another of your fanficks, if you have anymore that is. ta ta
swif death (Chapter 52) - Sat 17 Apr 2010
that was a very interesting story though i had been hoping that kagome would live. nothernless they got what they deserved and for that i am very pleased.
Hesunohana (Chapter 52) - Sun 28 Mar 2010
yes, what a sad ending. but a interesting idea.
But Miho, you didn't explain WHY her family hated her so...and you made me cry when he found her dead. :(
Can't stop laughing! Oh, this gonna be the visit to end all visits! One question, is Sesshoumaru going to be proactive by taking permanent action to eliminate any future in-law problems by eliminating most of his future in-laws?
YEAH! You didnt kill Kagome! I so hope Sesshy unleashes his full wrath upon Kikyo and her family... they soooooo deserve it. Also you Miho... you made my day! I woke up thinking that nothing new would be posted and here I found you had added 3 more chapters... I was estatic to jump in a read while I enjoyed my morning coffee... you are really good at this writing. Please keep it up.
I've been enjoying this so much. Here's a word prompt: retribution.
Neva (Chapter 31) - Thu 25 Mar 2010
Bad daddy! I hope Sesshomaru teaches him who is really the boss here :)
All right, Miho! These are some awesome drabbles. I hope every character gets what's coming to them, either good or bad. I can't wait for more.
sarhea (Chapter 27) - Tue 23 Mar 2010
A few more prompts: identity, popularity, lace, Jerusalem, stagnant, divorce, maze, carousel, turkey, Inuit, Viking, hypertension
Can't wait to see where you take the story
Haltia (Chapter 1) - Tue 23 Mar 2010
Let's see... -digs around for her documents of random words-
Here's what I found, hope these help at least a little? I do have more though, if need be!
Concentration Empty Spikes Rest Terrible Contrast Philosophy Anger Cry Home Impressed Breaking Stolen Fur Hope Passionate Notice Leaving Drug Comfort Gentle Sun
I really enjoy reading this story and hope you keep up the good work ^.^
still doing well... and I am still enjoying the story
sarhea (Chapter 19) - Mon 22 Mar 2010
Possible prompts: rainbow, mattress, xenophobia, surf, pineapple, abyss, continent, nanny
Hope they inspire you!
excellent job since so far... I really like where this is going... I am hoping through all of this she finds she is stronger than everyone was to believe or that Sesshomaru will realize that strength comes from within or some drabble like that... either way whatever you choose I am sure will be fine. Great Job! Keep writing...
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