Sesshoumaru's curt attitude when dealing with Ai was brilliant and Kagome's hyperventilation over what to wear made me grin. Thanks for the chapter.
Awww dear BeautifulMorningSun, I apologize for not having reviewed earlier!! Chapter 15 was gorgeous; every little detail, memory and conversation made me smile. It was just so sweet, and I look forward to reading more. A part of me is actually worrying if something bad might happen before Sesshoumaru can propose to Kagome, but then again, it's just me being paranoid.
Can't wait for more!! Keep up the excellent work, you're doing such an amazing job.
Anonymous (Chapter 14) - Sun 27 Jun 2010
Happiness and Sadness. Everyone is going to see their family and have a good time...except Kagome. She instead quotes Macbeth and has a sense of dnager. I can't wait to see what will happen though now that Kagome and Sesshoumaru are alone. Will he propose during Golden Week? The story can go so many ways fom here and I look forward to finding them out :)
Naraku enjoys causing trouble huh? Jeez, I'm so glad Sesshoumaru managed to get there in time. Plus, this means that Sesshoumaru and Kagome are alone right? Yay! Thanks for updating.
Sophie (Chapter 13) - Sat 19 Jun 2010
Vampire? Naraku? Scary! I sense troubles! Great chapter!
loveyaa (Chapter 13) - Sat 19 Jun 2010
Now that wasn't so hard was it? Hopefully things will seem a little brighter, but I tought it was funny that he wanted to do this the "right way" in a resturant in front of strangers. People are proposed to in so many different ways and there isn't one "right way" to do it. But I am looking forward to the travels they face before them truely together :)
Naraku... oh no. But on a more positive note the I love you's were exchanged and I'm so happy! Thanks for the update!
You paint great images with your story; I can see it all heppening so clearly!
Your story is a tad fast-paced, which I love!
Good work,
-S
I am glad things were resolved in a relatively calm manner thanks to Kagome. I wonder what will happen if Kagome decides that she's fed up with blood and gore and wants to leave? Will Sesshou let her? And will Kagome decides to take matters into her own hands and learn how to properly defend herself? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
That banter between Sango and Kouga was really funny, especially the "Sesshoumaru is yummy" part. But did you really have to end right there like that? And will you let Kagome have miko powers in this fic? I really hope that Kagome gets revenge on the Hunter that almost killed her that time. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
loveyaa (Chapter 12) - Mon 14 Jun 2010
thats a nice little bout of conflict. I wonder though if this hunter will be the villan of the story. I actually only care about how Sesshoumaru goes about wooing Kagome. He hasn't done such a good job so far which is a bit of a surprise. I can't wait to see how he turns things around.
Awesome chapter Beautiful! And congrats on graduating! Can't wait to see what you post up next! :)
L-desu (Chapter 12) - Mon 14 Jun 2010
it's great to see another update, and the conclusion to the hunter fight. well done. congrats on ur graduation! huzzah!
An enemy has emerged, I like it, plus Sesshoumaru was so much fun, warning her about Miroku even when she was stitching him up! Shows how much he cares. Thanks for the update!
Sophie (Chapter 12) - Mon 14 Jun 2010
Poor Kagome- I heard that male patients are very sensetive for pain and she had two males! She really would made a fine doctor. That was really nice chapter after the all wait, it's good thing you're back!
I loved it!
Rain (Chapter 11) - Thu 03 Jun 2010
i love ur story its different. i was wondering when u were going to up date?
AutumnRain
I am soooooo sorry for the delayed review!! I read this immediately when you uploaded it on Dokuga on iPhone, but I could not review. So now that I am back in Singapore after my graduation trip to Japan, I have to review this new chapter immediately! I appreciate the slow progress in the story - the way you made Kagome forge bonds with others is realistic. It is always better to have more friends, especially when one is caught in a situation like hers. Good job there, I am definitely looking forward to more!
KAggie (Chapter 11) - Mon 17 May 2010
Woo hoo! This is getting interesting indeed. I'm glad Kagome is getting friends in the household. And her and Sesshoumaru's relationship is getting back on track! :) I can't wait for the chapter to come.
loveyaa (Chapter 11) - Mon 17 May 2010
Yay to Kagome for not giving in and holding out for something better. I can't wait to see what happens next and maybe see Sesshoumaru get his butt into order and do something. Saving Kagome would be a nice start. Til next time when we see how the cookie crumbles :)
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