You know, you tend to make Kagome more immature than she was with fifteen and in your fic she´s already seventeen. That she´s lacking training is no secret but in all your fics she´s crying so much, often whining, emotionally weak (and that is so wrong) and just plain annoying. Kagome is far from perfect but she is emotionally strong(besides Miroku the strongest in that aspect), has a sharp mind, a strong intuition and will and is mature when it comes to things that not even adults seem to understand. For a 15 year old she is mature but that doesn´t mean she can´t be childish, I just wish you would tone it down. Hell I was nowhere near that mature when I was fifteen. I´m asking myself if you have ever read the manga because this characterisation of her is definitely from the beginning of the shitty anime.

Some things are repeating themselve again and again like Inuyasha is just plain cruel to Kagome which he never was to that degree, Kagome being a doormat when she always fought tooth and nail with Inuyasha or Sesshoumaru taking in so many humans when he prefers his solitude. He does not even travel so much with his pack because Jaken and Rin gets on his nerves sometimes. Him taking in Kagome is believable because he knows he will need Kagome´s ability to defeat Naraku but I hope that you won´t have Miroku and Sango join him too because he doesn´t need them and wouldn´t tolerate so many people near him or in his pack.

I´m sorry if I seem rude but sometimes it helps to hear the opinion of someone else and you do tend to repeat many things in your plots. Despite this you have a very nice writing style and I did not see any spelling or grammar mistakes and that is not a given in fanfiction nowadays. Just think about what I wrote and maybe you´ll agree with me.

I love the direction this story is going in and quite actually enjoying the training of Kagome... its nice to see how she was trained for once. Great Job and can't wait to read next chapter.

O_O oh thats AWESOME >:3 i cant wait for when Kouga finds him >:3

Good! Serves him right. This is one of the few times that I think he's getting exactly what he deserves. He'll probably come crawling back to his former pack grovel and submit (fat chance of that), or better yet, end up with Kouga. Nah, maybe not. Look forward to more.

I have no idea what he smelled, but I've gotten very curious.

By the way, I love what you've done to Kagome. I've read a lot of fanfiction that just says "Kagome got older and stronger" with absolutely no indication of how. With Sesshoumaru helping her, It's perfect. Training is not simple stuff. It's brutal, and I lvoe how you've captured that essence of painful, yet needed agony. Sesshoumaru is stern, and Kagome needs to learn to not interfere.

Therefore, kudos to you. You've given this fanfiction the agony it needs to make Kagome worthy.

Ps. Inuyasha's an asshole, not Miroku and Sango. ;)

Great story so far! When will Kikyo make her appearance? Bad Inuyasha! LOL! :)

0o0o0o0o0o0o0o *pounce syou* love this, i want more!

YAY! Good chapter. I liked the way Sessh is teacher her.

I think that no matter how much he apologizes, there is nothing Inuyasha can do or say to atone for his recent behavior.  Perhaps, after being out on his own for awhile (again), he will wish to become part of Sesshoumaru's pack, too?

Oh, wow...this is absolutely wonderful! I think that the whole Inuyasha giving Kagome to Sesshoumaru thing is very original. We all look for originality in fanfiction - I mean, seriously, how many different ways can there be to start something between the two? I really like how you are delving into Sesshoumaru's mindset and value system in regards to how Inuyasha runs his pack and the dynamics between all the pack members and the two Alphas. This is great, and I really hope that you add to it very soon. This is my first time reading anything of yours, and I will now have to go check to see if you have anything else, especially canon. Thanks so much for sharing this with us!

I have read just about all of the fics here.  You are awesome!!  I have read this one over and over waiting for updates. I just can't get over how well the story line is going!  Please keep doing what you do in order to entertain those of us who live for  these fics.  Great job and please update soon!  I love Sesshy..... :)

Great Job! I have to say I just love it that inuyashas sword doen't work anymore, he deserved it! Can't wait for next chapter..

Awesome story! Is Sesshoumaru actually after Kagome or is that to develope later and he is truely trying to goad Inu? And poor Kagome is finally getting a break. ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

please updata

lol. this is an awesome story. please update!!!!

oo, I like this new this new developement. Poor kagome just being tossed aside. and eck, on the kikyou/iy poor seesh for seeing. >P lol. Can't wait to see how he'll go about training her.

Wow.....  What can I say you always out do yourself.....  I am glad you continued writing this new story will become one of your greatest writings like the others.....  I love reading them....  I'm glad Inuyasha got his butt handed to him he deserved all that was delt and would be delt to him....

Question though?  Will Kagome once again obtain her soul and if so will she do it on her own or will Sesshomaru tell her to do it?  I never minded a Kikyou/Inu bashing but this story calls for it.  Big Time....  Well keep up the good work and update soon....  Love the story.......

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Nice! Good to see Kagome treated as a useful member of the pack. And that Inuyasha will be beaten over the head with his mishandling of her. Not that he'll admit to any fault. Looking forward to next time...

Yasha is such a twit.  He really doesn't get it, does he?  Well, I think he'll get what is coming to him, losing his pack, bit by bit.  Sesshomaru training Kagome in her Miko powers is just a step to bringing her out of her feelings of inadequacy and give her purpose.

I can see a slow development of feelings between Sess and Kag.  Good for you!  

I love your story! Update soon.