I just finished reading this a few minutes ago. I like the concept of having the mark on both of them, and the telepathic bond. Also I thought it was good that Kagome knew how to build a wall in her mind. Sesshoumaru's reactions to what she does in each chapter make sense and I enjoy the chemistry between them. You develop it at a realistic pace that works well in the fic.
Good job on the story! I enjoyed it!
kim (Chapter 6) - Tue 09 Feb 2010
i read this same story on fanfiction
Rosedream (Chapter 4) - Tue 09 Feb 2010
I loved this story until chapter 3. I liked the strong capable Kagome. But weak unsure Sesshomaru? Nope. And I highly doubt that Sesshomaru is all his "years" of living would not know how to block his mind from intrusion. Naraku wouldn't have been the first demon/half demon to read minds... So I am flaming the character representation of Sesshomaru. not in character at all.
I LOVED this chapter. Please hurry with the next update. I am so loving this story. I am so glad that you were inspired to write this one. I love the total connection that Sesshoumaru and Kagome have. More power to them both.
raven (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Feb 2010
I think you provided a great description of the vision shared by the pair. I really like this story and can't wait to see what is next. I like that Kagome's character is showing much more backbone when dealing with Inuyasha.
Kiri (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Feb 2010
I LOVE it girl! Keep them coming!!!!! >^.^<
Lexie (Chapter 5) - Mon 08 Feb 2010
lol!! i love what you did to kouga! it was hilarious!! please update the story is amazing so far!
LOVED this chapter. More please.
Dani (Chapter 4) - Sat 06 Feb 2010
Mmmmmm, hot, sexy Sesshomaru, yum! This was awesome, update soon please!
maribel mota (Chapter 4) - Sat 06 Feb 2010
well the chapter was rely good but my perverted mind was especting sone thing different, but don't pay attention to me....so keep doing a good job....see you soon.
maribel mota (Chapter 3) - Tue 02 Feb 2010
question.....what alsohole mean? .....just kidding.....you are soooooo bad how you let that chapter at the best part?.....i hope you update asap.
anon (Chapter 2) - Tue 02 Feb 2010
wow. Kagome is real violent huh? I always wondered how she can be so pure when she abuses that poor haynou to kingdom come.
Will she beat her kids too when they are bad? lol
Good chapter and I'm happy you update so frequently.
LOL...love this chapter. Cannot wait to read more. Please hurry with the next update.
I am glad to see this brought over from FF.net.... are you going to finish the story here instead of there now?
LOL...ohhh..that is sooo good. I wonder what Sesshoumaru will say to this development. I cannot wait to find out whta happens next. Please hurry with the next update.
maribel mota (Chapter 2) - Mon 01 Feb 2010
i rely like your story, but son time people don't update soon enough for my taste, so update as soon you can ok.....by the way i like the way you portrayed kagome, strong, caring and independent, inu is a pain in the ass as always ,every character have a special place in the inuyasha but people forget about that so i hope you don't, let see what is going on at the next chapter. bye
Cute =^-^= update soon or i will eat all the brownies and leave none for you! O.o
Kiri (Chapter 2) - Mon 01 Feb 2010
You have me hooked on this one for sure and you are now in my favorites so I can check for updated chapters - Keep them coming! LOVE it!
I am liking this story. Please update soon. Have to know what happens next.
Great first chapter! I can't wait to find out what Kagome did to Sesshoumaru! :)
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