KIKYOOOO!!!!!!!! Thiis iis the fiirst tiime ii've ever felt anythiing but hatred for her...
ii really liiked her iin thiis story...
how could she diie...
to thiink she would sacriifiice herself for them...iit's just so sad...
poor Kagome...she lost a part of her she thought she hated...
and poor Inuyasha...love iis never on hiis siide...
:'(
aaaaw! poor kikyo!
please update you are a wonderful storyteller
update!!!!!
the speech somes from buffy the vampire slayer, it the speech that buffy spoke to dawn just before she dove off the tower.
and i luv the way u used it !!!!!!!!!!!!
oooh o_O whats in the EGG???!!
please update!!
Wow I must say bravo to you!! I simply can not wait for the next chaper to your story 'A Heart Within the Blue Moon'. It's not often that i review stories on here but this was an absolute must. Congradulations, you just gained yet another fan and you may gain a few more for I will be sharing this story with my friends so that they may read it as well.
-Namine Yamini, angel/demon wolf princess of the southern lands
wow. sashiba alive? naraku's an arsehole.
OMG!!!! That was such an awesome chapter. I can't wait for the next.
I like the story and have enjoyed reading it so far but I'm wondering if you're even writing any new chapters, and why you're acting like you're newly writing these ones? I found the story done up to chapter 35 on FF.net and I'm just curious.
Another wonderful chapter, can't wait to read the next.
wow. nice cliffy but then again not all that nice to readers
this story is so amazing. i got caught three times in school readind this on my cell. it rocks my socks. i cant wait for the next chappie. it is so cool. please email me at xivangelbaby@yahoo.com . i would love to hear from you.
Awwww.... Cliffies are torture. Great story! Can't wait for more!
LOL!!! blank paper - it was obvious she was gonna be alpha neither inu brothers would tolerate the other and the rest of the group probs prefered kind hearted Kags than the other 2.
please updated!!!!!!!!!
First I must say that I was pleasantly suprised that you updated so soon as I am sure all your other fans would agree. Next, I am not sure that Sesshomaru should get the subjugation beads (sorry if I spelled that wrong) because even though he is slowly changing I am not sure he could get past it. Or maybe you can have her put one on him but when she is ready to use whatever word she choose for him, he catches it by their bond what she is about to do and covers her mouth then threatens something for her to take it off. Also if you do, how are you going to get around the fact that one, Sesshomaru knows what Inuyashas look like won't he know ahead of time what they are. Also because if not shielded they can read each other's mind how is she going to get away with what she is trying to do. I hope you understand what I am talking about. I don't want to confuse you it just sounded alot better in my head. Anyway you asked for opinions and these are mine. Either way you choose to go I can't wait for the next chapter. I so love this story.
LOL I so loved this chapter. Love Kagome's way of dealing with the Inu-baka's stubborn attitude. Please continue on. Love this story.
Kagome as alpha would be great and for her to subjugate him would be awesome please update soon =)
keep going keep going keep going this is getting really good
wow this is getting really good i hope u write more really really really soon i cant believe he died im glad u made him come back plz write more i cant wait till the next chapter
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