Nice story 

Loved it!! Great job!!

It's a fine story but It felt like a rape situation at the start. The food play way delicious and my favourite sex scene.

I would like to read more fan fictions from you with food play like that.

Cool story, i can completely see Sesshomaru going aboutthings like this lol

Awe that was cute and hot. Keep up the good work.

I genuinely enjoyed this. I read this straight through with no delay.

whaaaa is that it? someone please tell me this isn't all. just when I found such a great story i get kicked in the buns

wow this is a perfect portrayal od Sesshomaru. Him under the water getting that view made my stomach flip!! so awesome

Gasp who are you WRITER First u actually moved me enough to make me cry for Kagome now you shock me with Sess without it being cheesy. Just when I lost hope I found a good story yet again. this is already really good!!!

My first reaction at the end of this story? Whistfully sighs

Seriously, this story was exquisite. Your portrayal of Sesshomaru was so realistic, even though watching the series and only seeing him aloof  and a man of few words, one would tend to think how would he act normally when the doors are closed. I also love how orginal your plot was, i been reading fanfics since i was 14 and sess/kag have been my favorite couple to read.

So in part, you have both gratitude and respect and i look forward to reading more of your work :D

i've reread this chapter countless times now and everytime i read the phrase

"...sesshomaru kneeled..."

my heart would never fail to seize it's beat.. XD

its absolutely breathtaking yet heartbreaking.. i've read thousands of sesshomaruxkagome fanfics ever since i was 13 (i'm 19 now) yet i your fanfic can still take me by surprise everytime i reread it..  \

congratulations.. i hope you'll make another one.. XD

Awesome story very origional, I loved it! Thank you!!

Great job!  Loved the story and look forward to more.   It had me hooked on what was going on.

This was a great story,I loved it. I have read it before though I'm not sure where.....maybe F.F.

I loved this story. I hope there is a sequel. This story was great. Thanks

Where to start? Well, overall I really enjoyed this story. There were moments that had me worried (especially The Hot Springs and Moonlight), but things worked out. I certainly understood (if I didn't agree with) Sesshomaru's methods. His logic was a little odd to me, as was Kagome's, but it worked out in the end. The only thing that really put me off was the mind-reading thing, but that didn't harm my enjoying your writing.

One more thing, Royal Matters was excellent.

this was really good for way back then but because it's old we will never get to see how he reacts to what the well really means or what her time really means.

I know this story is finished, you might not edit it, and it was written a long time ago, but I figured advice is advice, no matter the timing.  I like your writing style, but I have a few...well okay one problem with the progression of the relationship between Sesshomaru and Kagome. There seems to be no built up of a relationship between them before the first sex scene.  In fact, I was 98% positive it was a rape scene till I continued reading and realized that Kagome was a willing participant. I have not read the rest of the story (which maybe I should have before reviewing), but I feel that this is very out of character for Kagome and rather thrown at the reader.  I don't believe that Kagome would just give into mating with Sesshomaru and enjoy it (no matter how handsome he is ;]) without some kind of relationship. And for the reader, there was no relationship built up and no foreplay to read so I feel that it was also as much of a surprise for as it was for Kagome. I advice would be to next time to try and build up the relationship between Kagome and Sesshomaru before jumping into the sack, so to speak.  It is more enjoyable and believable for the readers. Besides that, nice story so far and good luck with any future writing. 

The story is very good. I really like the way that you write, you kinda sound like a pro... the only thing that i did not like about the story, was how passive she was. I understand that she had to be submissive to Sesshoumaru, but completely giving up? Letting him have his way with her and not fighting him? That threw me for a round completely... The story is good, not the type of thing that i like, but it is good never the less. i won't finish reading it, cause like i say, i can't bring myself to do it. But please don't let this discourage you, you are a fantastic writer, i like to sample different things from time to time, and i will tell you what i think, but i don't want to discourage you, i don't like it when ppl tell me nothing but negative stuff either so... keep up your good work

~*Dr. Poetic*~

I just re-read this story, and all I can say is THANK YOU!  I just love this story.  It is so beautiful on such a soul touching level.  Even though it is full of lemons, I would never say that they are distasteful or vulgar, like a lot of them are in stories.  They are intimate and leave the reader feeling almost as loved as the characters.  Completely wonderful story!!!  Thank you for sharing it.