Reviews for Atonement by Miss Kagura

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Seluna Maru (Chapter 25) - Fri 24 Feb 2017

AHHHHHHHH I WANNA CRY! I don't remember that ending the first time I read this back then. Dokuga really needs some filter where u can add im a PRIVATE section the stories you've read and sort them into "liked" "I don't read again" lol great story but damn I don't like it all that much. My heart broke like 12 times!  Cot darn it! I would pay for that filter I do not wish to re read this in a few years CRYING????????????????????????????


Seluna Maru (Chapter 20) - Wed 22 Feb 2017

Ok so full on smut for Rin a twelve year old, but barely nada for the 4 main adults? Lol not weird at all


Seluna Maru (Chapter 16) - Sun 19 Feb 2017

Okay who am I kidding the story is so well-written I couldn't stay away. Even with the loss of Inuyasha I still want to hear reading. Still a bit depressing


Seluna Maru (Chapter 16) - Sun 19 Feb 2017

I know I've read this before but I didn't remember a lot of it. I wish this website had a marker that would tell us whether or not we like the story the first time we read it or not so that way we would know not to read it again. The depression I experience reading this was........ well let's just say I hope to not read this ever again too many losses


sessxkagfan (Chapter 1) - Sat 08 Aug 2015

i cant wait to read more of this


Inuaddict (Chapter 25) - Thu 29 Jan 2015

I nearly had a heart attack when you made us think the whole thing was a dream


Inuaddict (Chapter 15) - Thu 29 Jan 2015

OH COME ON NOT INU!!! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY


LavenderBoots (Chapter 1) - Sun 28 Dec 2014

This was well written. Interesting premise. Ok conflict resolution wise. I didn't particularly like the "males must defend mates," aspect but that is just me. As for the character's: loved Abi and Jaken. Everyone else was too ooc to connect to. If this had been an original story with original characters I probably would have enjoyed it more. Overall alright. Left a weird taste in my mouth by the end. 

*Spoiler alert*
 

I got wigged out by the idea of Inu dreaming up sesskags sex life. That's just wonky, and as for it being his dream, he was not there often enough to make a believeable dream depiction of sesskag's "love life," which I also had an issue wit,h but that is beside the point. I also can't imagine a man who has never had sex dream up the interaction between Rin and Sun, talk about creepy. Other than that I loved the little insights provided about sess's psyche and the tessaiga/ blanket scenario. 


toni-lea (Chapter 25) - Thu 19 Jun 2014

Great story. I was a bit pissed at the ending but then I remember the actual movie "Atonement" and how I was utterly livid I was at that end. But the anger has subsided and I get it now. I spend the whole day reading your story and I laughed and cried and I will never regret reading it.


Typicalyssa (Chapter 25) - Sat 11 May 2013

This was all a dream?! Wow! You really got me, hook, line and sinker, from start to end, and now you dropped the biggest bomb yet! Well played, Miss Kagura! Kudos to your brilliant imagination and writing. The ending was totally Inception quality. ;) I still refuse to believe this was all a dream by Inuyasha. Kinda sad for that poor guy. Nevertheless, I'm glad your epilogue was completely different from others as well as diverged from canon. Ok, enough gushing about your awesomeness. I shall review about the story now. It's a little pitiful that Rin had to die so many times. Can't a poor girl just live once? Haha.. But if it weren't for Inuyasha's careless mistake, Sesshoumaru and Kagome would not have been together. Their love story is just great. I liked the way you portray each of the characters. Sesshoumaru was deadly but with depth to his soul.  Kagome wasn't the normal helpless girl. And Abi is one hell of a cat! Meow! I was so psyched when she finally met Inuyasha. Their chemistry was sparking! Ooh! I love love love the forest top habitat. Great idea really. Where do you get all your inspiration from? Although, Miroku and Sango weren't given much in plot time, I'm happy you introduced Sun! He seems like the perfect match for Rin. It was interesting, the way they met. How Rin fell, jumped and then got picked up by Sun. =) Aww... I just can't stop babbling. I think I should end here, and go into post-awesome-fanfic depression. Thanks for the story!!! ^^

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I have no idea why my previous reviews turned out blank. I don't usually leave reviews, so for me to do it 3 times proves how impressed I was with this story. Hope you'll continue to write fanfics! 

 


Typicalyssa (Chapter 25) - Sat 11 May 2013

Typicalyssa (Chapter 25) - Sat 11 May 2013

Vel (Chapter 25) - Sat 09 Mar 2013

I'm sure you get this a lot. I love this story, but can't reallthey and the 'it was all a dream'. In general, it's a clichat that serves little purpose, and in this case I feel like it didn't add anything at all to the story but a depressing spin on an otherwise uplifting ending. I feel like it essentially dim issues everything in the story, and not just the events, but the messages as well. So, while I love your story, I will live with the blissful pretence that those last paragraphe don't exist


Alejandra (Chapter 25) - Sat 18 Aug 2012

Son of a #%*!? No way! That seriously did not just happen?! I never imagined that would happen. Oh gosh, no... This is this tale ends? Cannot write educated sentences. Train of thought derailed.


Alejandra (Chapter 24) - Sat 18 Aug 2012

Seriously one of the funniest chapters I've read.


Yashida (Chapter 25) - Fri 29 Jun 2012

Perfect!!!


Nieves Alarcon (Chapter 25) - Wed 28 Mar 2012
Wait a sec so it was all inuyashas dream?!!!

LadyAnaira (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Mar 2012

Absolutely Brilliant!!! My hat off to you! You wrote a beautiful flowing story that I spent the entire day reading and I couldn't pull myself away from the screen. It made me laugh, it made me cry, you drew all the emotions out of me that a story should draw out. I think the ending was positively beautiful considering its new take on an ending. It's a plot twist I had never seen before.


sad fan (Chapter 25) - Mon 06 Feb 2012

I spent all day reading this storie becuase it was so good. This was one of my favoirte stories until I read the ending. I canot believe this storie ended this way. It makes me want to cry. Really not happy right now. 


Knight of Disorder (Chapter 25) - Mon 30 Jan 2012

Great story just hate the ending. I hate Inuyasha as a character most of the time so yeah, but still hate the ending. You still get high marks thought, if that last bit wasn't there it would be one of my favorite stories.


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