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jk (Chapter 7) - Thu 24 Dec 2009

shoes, stole, coat or something similar, ornate carved brush and hand mirror and in the end a ring, the last give a proposal of marriage or mating.

:D

 

merry christmas and a happy new year


Anonymous (Chapter 7) - Thu 24 Dec 2009

man that would make such a nice set! ^ ^


Lexie (Chapter 7) - Thu 24 Dec 2009

wow. your writing is very good im loving the story line. just who is this secret admirier? i think we all know that ^_^

please update!


Kira (Chapter 7) - Thu 24 Dec 2009

You know, they should reall allow us to edit our reviews. Cause, an awsome idea struck me while i was getting ready to logg out! Ok, what if, since it doesn't look like you'll be finishing anytime soon, like, not by tomorrow....Wat if you changed this a bit? like....make them actually do what your making them head towards (which i hope is a mating of somesort) on new years day? maybe then you could extend the days, maybe have some encounters, some words spoken, some flirting. Not a gift on everyday. Maybe add more details? Thatd be nice. You have just the right amount of details for a great story, more would just make it even better!

Lol, see why i wish we could edit our reviews!? itd make things so much easier. Of course, that was just an idea. i hope you do finish by x-mas, thatd be a wonderful gift, perfectly timed and everything! But, if not, so long as you finish the story is wonderful. I really want to see how it ends!

 

~Kira, again -.-;


tina (Chapter 7) - Thu 24 Dec 2009

a fitting gift I think would be a stuffed dog like his true form using rabbit fur or something equally soft or even a demon puppy or kitten what girl can resist a plushy or an adorable baby animal for christmas


Kira (Chapter 7) - Thu 24 Dec 2009

This is a wonderful story so far! I kinda had to look up the "on the # day of x-mas my husband gave to me..." song, to kinda see how long this story would have to be by x-mas, at least, that was when i read the first chapter and realized what you were going to be doing with this very intruiging story. lol. x-mas is in two days, so it doesn't seem likely, as you said, that you';; bee finishing anytime soon.

However....if you write all night and day tomorrow, and publish the 8th to the 12th early x-mas day...

to help you out i called my friends (my female friends) and asked what would be the best long lasting gift. besides the ones you've already used. And i added the time period. Heres what we came up with.

Hair decorations, a pet of some kind, a person gift (like a poem or something), chocolate (if they had that back then), an enchanted rose or some sort of flower (maybe a cherry blossom?), a painting, a toy of somesort, a horse for travel (cause we all know her riding on the back on inuyasha would annoy sesshy), a sweet candy, a silver mirror for her to see herself in, one that will never break no matter the abuse (i got this thought from imagining inu getting fed up with the girts by the 10th and trying to break one, but it wouldnt break! lol)

Those are the ideas we came up with. If you can use the thats fine, it wasn't too hard to think of them, considering we were thinking of what we'd lke to get.... lol, anyways, i hope your plan for this to be done before x-mas comes through! Good Luck! And a Merry X-Mas!!!!

~Kira


Exxie Valentine (Chapter 7) - Thu 24 Dec 2009

I really like your story, I can't wait for more ^^

I was thinking, someone might have already submitted it though, but Sesshoumaru could give her a journal maybe. I don't know what it would look like, maybe light blue, matching the jewelry?

I hope I helped you some, Happy Holidays :D


GreyEcho (Chapter 7) - Wed 23 Dec 2009

Very cute chapter! And even if you don't finish by xmas it'll be an extended treat. ^_^

 

as for gift suggestions....*_* ...um..shoes fan, dagger???? maybe someone gets sick and he leaves a herb she needs...... sorry if that doesn't help.


Time on my hands (Chapter 7) - Wed 23 Dec 2009

I really enjoyed this chapter. The snowman was just the kind of whimsical thing that Kagome would do. As far as gift suggestions, he has given her gifts that reflect something of himself. The crescent moons, the sakura... You should keep it in the same vein. There have been numerous instances of Kagome getting into trouble because she dropped her bow and had no weapon. Perhaps a jeweled dagger, adorned with appropriate Sesshoumaru symbols of course.


FangedBeasty (Chapter 7) - Wed 23 Dec 2009

I don't care if you finish it before Christmas as long as you finish it :D   I am really liking the direction your taking this.  You could give her a day without Inuyasha, oh that would be funny :D. 


Juanita Angerstein (Chapter 7) - Wed 23 Dec 2009

Your story is coming along nicely, and I am enjoying reading it.  As for gift suggestions.....a ring to match the rest of the jewlery, some sort of shoes to match the kimono, a cloak, a fan.....that's all I've got for now.  Keep up the great work, and don't worry over deadlines.....


autumngold (Chapter 7) - Wed 23 Dec 2009

What a fun chapter!  I wonder what Sesshoumaru was thinking when he watched her building her snowman?  I wish he would have come out of hiding to help.  As of thoughts of what else he could give her I'm stuck.  Is there some type of food he could give her?  Or maybe something to hide her jewel shards where other demons wouldn't sense them?  Or some type of pillow to sleep on?  Don't mind me, my ideas stink.  That's one of the reasons I would never write a story.  Can't wait for your next update!


Sala (Chapter 6) - Tue 22 Dec 2009

As much as I would appreciate having two chapters per day (in order to make the Christmas deadline), I would much rather you spend your time carefully crafting longer chapters and not rush through in order to make your own deadline.  :)


Anonymous (Chapter 6) - Tue 22 Dec 2009

man what is inuyasha getting all fired up bout? he has kikyo? right?

 

well update! ^ ^


autumngold (Chapter 6) - Tue 22 Dec 2009

Why should Inuyasha care that Kagome is hiding something from him?  I don't see him telling her that he had been visiting Kikyo?  Why are secrets ok for him but not for her?  Kagome doesn't owe him anything, and I'm glad that she is starting to realize it.  I'm also glad that Kagome has Sesshoumaru there to show her how special she really is!  Thank you so much for the update!  Hope you post more soon!


Anonymous (Chapter 5) - Mon 21 Dec 2009

man that was soo sweet of him...-.-...even though he is impassive...-.-

 

update! ^ ^


Lexie (Chapter 5) - Mon 21 Dec 2009

ohhhh!! ^_^ please continue im loving it! its so sweet and innocent and christmassy!!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 5) - Sun 20 Dec 2009

haha he gave her a jewel shard >:3 cute


FangedBeasty (Chapter 5) - Sun 20 Dec 2009

I can't wait until she notices who is giving her the gifts


autumngold (Chapter 5) - Sun 20 Dec 2009

Why is Inuyasha so bothered by Kagome's secret admirer?  He doesn't seem to think she's worth anything, why should it bother him that someone else does?  Thank you so much for this update, I'm really enjoying this story!  Does Sesshoumaru like seeing Kagome wear his presents?  Can't wait to find out!


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