awww don't let this be the end. PLEASE DO A SEQUEL AND CONTINUE!
Boy, could Inuyasha learn a thing or two from his brother. I absolutely loved this story. The way you showed his courtship through gifts was amazing. On the surface you would think that he was just trying to impress her with the extravagance of the gifts and buy her affections. But if you look deeper, each of the gifts has a meaning. He is expressing his desire for her, his confidence in her abilities, his belief that she is a worthy mate. Unlike someone else who sees nothing but an inferior copy of his dead love, he wants Kagome for herself. For who and what she is. You have conveyed this perfectly. Kagome also has the insight to see the gifts for what they are, to realize the meaning. Eventually, anyway. Once she finally puts two and two together and gets four. Math was never her strong suit. lol. But then, you got that right too. Kagome can be a little on the dense side at times.
The only other thing I could ask of this story is an epilogue. A little bit of their happy ever after. You had Sesshoumaru having tea with her mother in her time. Sesshoumaru was hiding from Kagome, so that says the whole time paradox thing is in play. How long has her mother known? How many kids did they have? Who else survived? Inquiring minds want to know.
*throws up confetti* Yay! Very sweet. :)
autumngold (Chapter 12) - Sun 24 Jan 2010
I'm so glad that you finished your story. I've really enjoyed reading it. I just wonder what Inuyasha's reaction will be when he finds out that Kagome and Sesshoumaru are together? I hope that he learns to regret what he foolishly threw away! Great story!
Angela (Chapter 12) - Sat 23 Jan 2010
waaahhh! so romatic! i love it! ^ ^
YAY! Their going to meet!!!! XD
So that was the future him?
noooooooo! must read the last chapter!!!
you are such a wonderful, addicting writer!
Angela (Chapter 11) - Sat 16 Jan 2010
kyaa! so cute! and so romantic too!
Aww oh how romantic! I can't wait for the last one. What will Inuyasha. Think?
tina (Chapter 10) - Tue 05 Jan 2010
*squeeeeeeees!!!!!!!!!!!!!* a puppy what better christmas present for girl
Cute! Nothing says I love you better than a cuddly puppy! I bet he looks just like my "Babe" did. InuYasha's going to be even more jealous. Please, please please don't let him or Kikyo do anything regrettable to the puppy...
Angela (Chapter 10) - Tue 05 Jan 2010
awww i wish i had a dog like that...but mines already big and 8 years old...-.- hehe but still cute! ^ ^
sesshou-MARU!!! ^ ^
autumngold (Chapter 10) - Tue 05 Jan 2010
Sesshoumaru picks the best presents for Kagome! I love the puppy! Inuyasha had better not try to hurt it, or I will find some way to hurt him! Thank you for the update! I can't wait for Kagome and Sesshoumaru to meet, to get to know each other. Please post again soon!
OMG! Sesshy's POV! This was the sweetest chapter! he admited that he loves her! And he wants to....cuddle?! KAWAIIIIIIIII!
Wood (Chapter 10) - Tue 05 Jan 2010
Another wonderful chapter. Yeah! Thanks for spreading the warm gift giving feeling that comes with christmas. It has been a much needed spirit lifter for me. (I has to put my senior cat down on the 23rd.)
Gah! Cute! I'm glade she definately knows. Can't wait to see what happens. :D
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