Please update soon! I love this story! I even put it on my favorites list so I could get the updates!
Oh, so CUTE! I would just cuddle up with a puppy from sesshoumaru too! lol, i can't wait for the next chapter! I was waiting forever for it, but when i saw it i was like "YES!!!"
Were the puppies eyes golden? or the regular hazel? And i bet it was fluffy, wasn't it? I bet she really does know who her admirer is, what with the fact she named the puppy Maru, a type of nickname from his name. Sesshou would have been too obvious, i think. And, isn't the Maru part of his name the 'perfection' part? In essence, she called the puppy 'perfect'!
I can't get over how he was thinking of her, i hope the next chapter is out soon!
And how was your x-mas and new years? Are your bf troubles gone? I hope everything is okay, now....
Please update soon!
~Kira
Lexie (Chapter 10) - Mon 04 Jan 2010
naaaawwwwwwww :)!!! so cute! im loving your story
please update!!
Saholia (Chapter 10) - Mon 04 Jan 2010
Awww--so cute :)
Kanna37 (Chapter 10) - Mon 04 Jan 2010
Can't wait for the last couple chapters...
Amber
XD Glade the suggestion was helpful. That was a awesome last two chapters. I'm exciters she knows...I think . ^_^ Can't wait to see what happens.
Oh and have a good new year.
Sala (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Dec 2009
Other gift possibilities: an elegantly painted fan, a set of chopsticks, high-end pottery (like a vase for ikebana).
autumngold (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Dec 2009
I'm so glad that Kagome's mirror didn't break, stupid Inuyasha. It must be wonderful now that Kagome realizes that Sesshoumaru is interested in her. Now just to get rid of Inuyasha. Hopefully Kaede's hut doesn't get ruined by Kagome sitting Inuyasha too much. Beautiful update! Can't wait for more!
Lexie (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Dec 2009
oooh ^_^ i want to see what the other gifts are gonna be!
please hurry and update!
Angela (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Dec 2009
/sweatdrop/ hehe poor inu...hehe ^ ^
Saholia (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Dec 2009
Inuyasha's such a child--he should just be happy she's happy instead of beeing so selfish. He already has Kikyou, why not accept that Kagome will move on. I love how you've woven my favorite song, "12 days of Christmas" into this story :) Keep it up! And even if this wasn't completed by Christmas, hopefully it can be completed by next Christmas xD...(or New Years? ::wink::..)
Kira (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Dec 2009
I'm so happy you used that idea! I loved how you used it by the way, brilliant! Inuyasha deserves every one of those sits! What will she do now though? will she go and find her seceret admirerer?
I was smiling when i read about the mirror, and the giggling and clapping to myself as i read the bit of the bouncing and not breaking! I was so happy! lol, my mom thinks im insane, but i dont care! Lol!
I hope your bf problems are ok. I haven't continued my story since i broke up with him :(
good luck! Hope you had a nice X-Mas!
~Kira (ps: and thanks again for mentioning my name!)
awwwww, cute story. good chapter...i bet she knows who it is...i wonder when the secret admirier is going to show himself...
good job and update soon...
I will answer you anonymous. Right before the creature got to her, she felt a thump which meant something was thrown to or at her. It made her look to her side to see the dagger. That means that Sesshoumaru threw her the dagger trusting that she had the knowledge and courage to defend herself just as time on my hands beautifully explained.
I'm glad she was able to save herself, even though her mysterious gift-giver helped in a round about way. In most stories, she is usually saved at the last moment by someone else killing the bad youkai. Here she was merely given the weapon and it was up to her to save herself. It was a good morale booster and lesson for her.
Anonymous (Chapter 8) - Sat 26 Dec 2009
?.? where did she get the dagger...i know sess gave it to her but where did she get it...i'm kinda clueless...?.?
I'm glad I was able to give you an idea for a gift. However, you wrote it so well that she actually received two gifts. The second was his confidence in her abilities. Unlike Inuyasha, who constantly runs her down telling her how weak and useless she is, her admirer allowed her to use her new gift to handle the situation herself. He could have stepped in and rescued her, but he knew she was capable of taking care of herself. Of course she is unaware of that gift. Can't wait until she figures out who her admirer is.
And so what if you don't finish this story by Christmas. Is there some unwritten law that you can only write Christmas stories at Christmas? It will still be just as good if I read it after Christmas. I'm sure your readers will forgive you for having a life. Most of us do. And for those that don't, they will just have to be patient. Merry Christmas! And thank you for sharing your wonderful story.
1. a fan
2. a sword
3. an obi
4. new tabi socks, or slippers
5. hair 'sticks'/oriments
6. scented powers, like jasmine, or rose,
7. bath oils
8. a new pouch/backpack...leater
9. fighting kimono
10. something magical like a sakura blossom that never wilts.
11. gift of forever, mating :p
all things you could do, or try variations of. LOVE this story, cant wait for more! and for Kagome to findout its Sess, and what will happen next.
autumngold (Chapter 8) - Fri 25 Dec 2009
Don't apologize for not being done by Christmas, I'm just glad that you are continuing your story. Very nice chapter, great eighth gift. Sesshoumaru is a very smart demon. Can't wait to read more!
Kira (Chapter 8) - Fri 25 Dec 2009
I love how you had him send her a gift that helped her right away! Now she can yell at inuyasha, and when sesshoumaru tells her who i was giving her gifts, she can rub it in inus face that sesshy helped her more than inuaysha did. Inu might have protected her more, but that doesn't help her as much as giving something she can defend herself with!
Again, lovely chapter. I understand about this season being terribly busy. lol, hope to see another chapter soon! And thanks to the two that gave you the dagger idea! Very nice!
~Kira
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