Awww... That is so cute!!! I can't wait for another update! especially since I know what should happen next! (When you mentioned the myth I looked it up and read it... I must admit, it makes for a great romance!)

And just a quick question... Will Kagome ever know that Sesshoumaru is/was Musubi? I hope she learns but I'm afraid of what would happen...

Anyways, update soon!!

Rachel,

  this chapter is wonderful I have been following your story for some time and I think you get better and better with every story. The sensuality I felt when I read this chapter blew me away. Its well done and is better then some of the recent lemons that have been written in some stories. So please continue you wonderful writing and I eagerly await the next chapter.

that's a nice idea Fluffy has to keep his identity secret but what'll he do when she has the pups? gonna be a BIT hard to hide it from his smart Lady

anyway love the story and I wish that they could live together forever...as in neither dies...pwease?

Dear Rachel:

Oh, WOW!! What a chapter!!!

The way Sesshomaru is choosing to seduce Kagome is just so erotic, so full of passion, and desire, that it made me heady and it made my sking tingle by just reading it!

I am at awe at how you describe his reverance, his adoration, the way he is willing to deny himself just to make sure that she will learn to love him for who he is rather than what he is!

I couldn't imagine being in Kagomes shoes and not feel burned by his passion! It is hot, it burns, and the heat is so delicious that I would gladly burn to ashes in his arms!

I am dying to find out how Kagome reacts to her first night with Sesshomaru, and what else can he do to ensure that she will give him all that he desires, her love, her trust, her soul...

Please, pretty please! I beg you to find it in your heart to update soon! I know real life takes precedence over your internet life, but I hope you will find the time and inspiration to gift us with another chapter soon!

Thank you for writing and sharing!

MidCat

aw i love this chapter! i love the way you describe the lovemaking, it was beautiful.

i hope she gets to see him soon! i want to see them progress!!!

O.O Wow... that was some awesome writing, you did a wonderful job and I'm so glad you updated! Great job and I can't wait to see what happens next ^.^

this chapter made me a bit sad, for i didn't realise that he intended to never show her his face. i hope u will update soon.

Stunning retelling of the story, and you have done your homework with the Japanese aspects of the tale.  Grammar, execution, continuity... all top notch.  I am entranced and look forward to your future chapters.

that was great   loved it. 

cant wait for the next one.

So, I started reading this story back when you first posted it, and then left it for a while. Just today I picked it back up and I must say I am pleasantly suprised at the progress you have made. Great job so far!

I just read all 11 chapters in one sitting, lol. I like it! I hope you post the next chapter quickly :)

Nice update - and I'm glad that Kagome is still fighting, not just giving in.  Although I wish I could get my hands on Kagura. Grr!

Amber

This is why I hate Kagura, that arrogant bitch should be brought down a few pegs. I wish you hadn´t taken Kagome´s power away so that she had blasted Kagura away and I hate it when she´s so helpless.

oooooh it gets interesting! I'm so glad your back I was hoping you didn't abandon this story and now your back! Yay!!! *gives you update cookies from r0o's stash* Can't wait for more!

OMG you can't leave it there!! I read the entire ten chapters this morning and I need more lol.

I was really glad that you won the nomination. HUZZAH! HUZZAH! Anyways I want to thank you for giving us a another chapter to read. Fantastic! I just cant help wonder if Kagomes husband, Sesshoumaru, will break all her beliefs on gods. Will he be able to re-shape Kagome's ideals? Thanks again for this great chapter and cant wait for the next one to come out!

aww she had to leave  but i have to wander if Sesshou will treat her right when he finds her

Aww that's so sad D8 Please update soon! I want to know what happens! Congratz on the nomination :D I voted for you!