Reviews for Godlike by Rachel

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KyraTekak (Chapter 15) - Mon 30 Aug 2021

Good story so far 


hana sora (Chapter 15) - Sun 27 Jan 2013
Updateeeee T-T

randomfan17 (Chapter 15) - Mon 06 Dec 2010

At least Sesshomaru is smarter then Cupid in this case. If Kagome doesn't listen everything will be fine, if she does listen i'll want to hit her upside the head for being stupid, all she needs to do to see him is trust him, that's easy since he's never hurt her and he's giving her everything she wants. I love this story and i'm sorry i didn't review before, i was just reading to get through all of this and get everything in my head it was so good.


lara (Chapter 15) - Thu 18 Nov 2010

I only found this story today & have read all 15 chapters & I look forward to reading more. I can't help but wonder will she ever see his face or know him during the daytime once she truly trusts him will she finally have that or will she never know what he truly looks like or who he really is or even what his name is?


Tiffany0314 (Chapter 15) - Sat 16 Oct 2010

When will you post another chapter? :)


Tiffany0314 (Chapter 14) - Mon 11 Oct 2010

Wait, so, does Sesshomaru plan on never allowing Kagome to view his face? Himself in the light? Or does he just want to wait until he feels he is certain that she already loves him fully before showing himself, so that he is sure that she does not only love his for his beauty? Hope to get a quick reply! Thanks!(: -Tiffany


Most Unlikely Angel (Chapter 15) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

I'm actually getting quite scared at this point, lol. I'm very very familiar with this particular myth and i know how it ends..i don't like how it ends and i'm wondering if ur sticking to this ending. I won't hate ur story if u end it the same way cuz it is a realy good story and i'm enjoying it, I guess i'm a happily ever after kinda person, lol cliche i know but ah well, lol. Well keep up the good work, i look forward to the next capter ^_^

MUA (Most Unlikely Angel) 0:)


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 15) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

Yay for updates!! And 0o0o0o0o0oh it's a good one, i can't help but wonder what Kikyou's going to say to Kagome ( i srsly need to check out the myth of Cupid and Psyche to refresh my memory cuz i dun remember it lol) 

Srsly though it was awesome and I sooooo can't wait for another chapter!!!


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 14) - Sun 29 Aug 2010

o0o0o0o0o0oh hooray for updates!! I was beginning to think you ran away on us! LOL Anywho awesome as always and i kinow their building things up, but since i have never read the myth this story is based on, does she ever get to see his face?

As always I can't wait for more!


ginny_sak (Chapter 14) - Sun 29 Aug 2010

soo romantic!! (and passionate >///<) i <3 it!! the next, pleasee!! ^0^


MoxyMikki (Chapter 14) - Sun 29 Aug 2010

I had thought this story abandoned so I removed it from my story alert. You can imagine my relief when I caught the update! I would have been sad to miss it. I'll be re-adding it to my alerts. I never wanted to ask about it because as a fanfic writer myself, I can imagine that when you have IRL things going on, it isn't your main concern to worry about a story, and constant queries about updates only make it harder sometimes. I always worry that "please update soon!" will sound more like nagging, than what is really my eagerness to read more because I enjoy a piece. And you really are such an elligant and refined writer. You speak deeply through your narration and characters, and it isn't every day when you read something that makes you go "hm" and really think. I am curious (and please dont say anything if it will give anything away, because its not my intent to weisle information out of you about the story, but rather my confusion) Why does Sesshomaru not want Kagome to see him? Does he plan on at some point allowing her to or is it not his intention for her to ever see him? I imagine that at some point she WILL catch a glimps of him but perhaps not intentionally (as you've already illuded to the fact that that is a possibility when she glimpsed his claws - I'm wondering what her reflect on THAT will be too.... maybe next chapter) Thank you for sticking with the story, and I look forward to more.


Makuro767 (Chapter 14) - Sat 28 Aug 2010

RACHEL!!!! You came back! I missed you!!!


hola (Chapter 13) - Sat 10 Jul 2010
1. someone should fire their interior decorator 2. damn..... berries are sexy now? 3. i need a cold, cold shower now... yay! for updating!!! :)

Sunset Senshi (Chapter 13) - Mon 28 Jun 2010

If you do not update this I will die........................of anticipation xD


neteyri (Chapter 13) - Sun 27 Jun 2010

you really need to continue your story  it is very fascinating i would love to read more


Midnight Cat (Chapter 13) - Sun 27 Jun 2010

OMG! What a wonderful chapter!

I imagine that it must have been lonely to wake up after a night of so much passion to find the space next to you empty.

It would make it seem as if my husband only wanted me at certain times, but not always. I understand his reasoning behind the actions he has taken, but it still seems as if the loneliness experienced by Kagome during the day was a bit cold. I would have hoped to have someone to talk to, or kep me company, for all the beauty inside and outside of that huge palace make it seem as a gilded cage if she is all by herself.

The way you describe the scenery, made everything seem so beautiful, but at the same time so lonely, for she had no one to share all that beauty with.

During her explorations I kept wondering about nourishment, and why was she not hungry, but I was glad that you used that to Sesshomaru's advantage!

The sensual way he fed her, made me thisty and hungry for the same, and I know that there was no sweeter fruit than the one he would provide for her!

Her rebellious nature made me fear that she would revert all the work Sesshomaru had done to please her and endear her to him, but I imagine that no one could best Sesshomaru when it came to passion and the ways of the flesh. It is a bit underhanded, but if that is what it will take to gain a bit of trust from her, so be it.

Sesshomaru's seduction was sinful and oh!, so delicious! The alternating attacks on her senses was enough to make my breath hitch for a second! The fact that he was feeding her the delicious berries at the same time that he was tuning her body to desire was divine!

The "lessons" he is teaching her, makes me want to be innocent so that he may teach me forever!

I am looking forward to his next lesson with anticipation! Thank you for updating again! It was a most welcomed treat and a wonderful surprise!

Thank you again, for writing and sharing!

Hugs:

MidCat


K (Chapter 1) - Sun 27 Jun 2010

I wish that Sessho can turn invisible during the day, so that Kags can't see him but that he's watching her... taking care of her during the daytime ("in the shadows") ... wasn't he able to do that when he was about to assassinate kagome? When I was reading chapter 13 and Kags woke up by herself, I felt bad for her... her being sore and everything without warmth of sesshou.. it was like a "one-night stand"... sniffles. the whole time, I was thinking, I know sesshou is around somewhere in the shadows, watching over Kags as she stumbles through the castle.. but nope. No invisible Sesshou. =/ Where was he???

Anyways, enough of my rambling. Please continue writing (as I'm sure you're thinking about the plot and is writing as we speak) *winks*  =)

 


elisa128 (Chapter 13) - Sun 27 Jun 2010

love it love it love it you have a great way again of writing sensuality. I always love when the writier can write a story like you have. Plus I love the fact her spine is starting to show a lil more and that Sessho is turning it into his plans its very cleverly done.


Kukuro-kunami (Chapter 13) - Sun 27 Jun 2010

♥ this chapter~!!! Update as soon as you can ;]


Kay (Chapter 13) - Sun 27 Jun 2010

Update soon. this was so good. AND it was HOT!! Can't wait to read more.

I know this myth (psyche and cupid) but is the storyline going to be exactly or somewhat like it? Or are you going to change it some and give it your own twists?

Thanks so much for a quick update and a wonderul read.

(btw, I've been following this fic for awhile, but didn't review it because I don't have an account here. But I came to find out that you can review fics even though you don't have an account!) ^^

Well, hurry to update. Can't wait for moreeeeee!


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