Don't worry, I think you did a great job. On a side note, the only inaccuracy would be what she is wearing, but your allowed a bit of creative license.

LMAO!!!!!!!!     I laughed so hard!!!    Its a realy good inturpretation...   I loved it!   You did a very good job writing this!   I was truely amazed!   Keep up the great work!

Good luck!    

That was awesome you did YokaiYume proud with that (though obviously i can't speak for her) i love the art and i love your fic too! yay! Ja ne Aimee-chan

Brilliant. I've seen the fanart that you based tihs on, and I must say, you did it fair justice. Well done.

I really like it, guess I’ll have to check out the thing you got the idea from. I don't know why but when she was ranting about real washing machines I had a flash back to a commercial I saw years ago for an eco friendly hand washer, it's like a ball with a crank on a swing type base, you fill it with a bit of water & soap & spin it for however long to wash your clothes.  I guess if you go camping or something since it would fit on a picnic table no problem with plenty of room left over.

No, it's a good try. You picked one of the best pics to narrate. That's courage and you did a good job.

OMG!!!  I love that little comic, and you did a good job of catching it, too.  Really cute!

Amber

That was fabulous! Don't put yourself down! I admit, I was hesitant when I saw what you were doing, thinking no fic could come close to doing that comic justice, but you did a great job. It was very cute. I admit, I was hoping for a bit more smut, but you ended it right where the comic ended, so I really can't complain- lol.

I can't stop laughing.  Perfect story to go with the picture!  I wonder if Kagome is going to have to go home to buy more?  Thanks for the story! :)