are u goin 2 continue this?
This is pretty damn good. Are you going to continue, I hope so, you have a fan! This reminds me of the moth demon, in one of the movies, where Kagome shoots Inuyasha with an arrow because she was being controlled. When Kikyo pushed her back through the well and she cried at the sacred tree, her and Inuyasha could see and hear eachother but no one say him, Sota thought she was going crazy. This is unique, I was wondering if this was like that episode? the moment any way, where she saw him come to her. I hope you continue this story is really great and unique, I love the story line. I can't wait for more. Write on!
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InuAngel
Wow. This is morbidly fascinating. Really out there. It's intriguing - I hope you update soon, I'd love to read more. The only thing I have to suggest is watch the grammar and punctuation.There were a few errors I noticed throughout this, but other than that, it's good. =)
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