Reviews for Neighbors by Inumaru_Rapture

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Mander B. (Chapter 5) - Wed 04 Nov 2009

Maybe me and my husband should play the game of Life and drink, I want that to happen to me! Oh yeah, I am again reading this at work and managed to stay 10 minutes late so I could finish the chapter. My favorite authors are PirateQueen0405 and Forthright for their writing styles and also they make the characters realistic not fake and ignorant. I think I can place you up there now. Awesome, the progression of their relationship is growing well and not getting boring, your brining more and more into the story like Pillsbury biscuts, thin and oh so good. (Im hungary by the way)! Great job!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 5) - Wed 04 Nov 2009

Speechless, I am speechless. That was...WOW! I am so enjoying this story. You are doing a great job of it. You've gotten me hooked!


autumngold (Chapter 5) - Wed 04 Nov 2009

Love the new chapter.  I hope in the next one though Kagome will be able to get some satisfaction.   :)  It's not fair that Sesshoumaru gets all of the fun.  Especially when she defends his honor that way.  I just hope that Sesshoumaru will be able to keep Hojo away from Kagome.  It seems like he is a real creep.  Is he the reason why Kagome doesn't want to have sex?  Not that I have any problem with them waiting.  Please post another chapter soon.  Can't wait to see what you have planned next!


Musouka (Chapter 4) - Wed 04 Nov 2009

I LOVE IT!

I REALLY DO!

Your Such A Good Writer And The Portrayal Of Sesshomaru And Kagome Is Beautiful.

Can't Wait To Read More So Update Soon!


Mander B (Chapter 4) - Tue 03 Nov 2009

I lurve it! Im all giddy, this took up about 2 hours of my work time to read. I want more! Great job!


FangedBeasty (Chapter 4) - Tue 03 Nov 2009

I really enjoy were you are taking this, can't wait to see where this story next goes.  :D


Mskumiko (Chapter 4) - Tue 03 Nov 2009

great story can't wait to see what happens to keg&sessy


autumngold (Chapter 4) - Mon 02 Nov 2009

Please, please if you could grant my request, please let Inuyasha ruin the family business.  He is such a jerk, just because he has never had to work for a thing in his life.  How dare he embarass Kagome and Sesshoumaru that way.  He really needs to have something unpleasant happen to him soon.  Thank you so much for the new update!  I can't wait to find out what you have planned for Kagome and Sesshoumaru next!


Asuka-sama (Chapter 4) - Mon 02 Nov 2009

Omg. That was too cruel of an ending! You have to update soon! I need to know what happens! The nerve of Inuyasha. :P He should have kept his big mouth shut. Anyway, enough of my ranting. I really like where your story is going, and you need to update A.S.A.P. Until then! :D


ameire (Chapter 4) - Mon 02 Nov 2009

Thank you for updating! Ugh. Inuyasha is such an ass-hole. I would've loved for Sess to beat him up if I hadn't thought the smug little bastard would've sued him for it. I laughed so hard at the old neighbor incident! 

Oh, and Is this what the dress would look like? Except for the color? 

http://slimages.macys.com/is/image/MCY/products/7/optimized/650257_fpx.tif?bgc=255,255,255&wid=327&qlt=90,0&layer=comp&op_sharpen=0&resMode=bicub&op_usm=0.7,1.0,0.5,0&fmt=jpeg


sunset in love (Chapter 4) - Mon 02 Nov 2009

so,inu is a real asshole here huh... goota see where this will go next...


FayeMegan (Chapter 4) - Mon 02 Nov 2009

Grrr that InuYasha! What a dick. Sesshoumaru shouldn't have even acknowledged him! I love this story more and more with each chapter. I feel like Sesshoumaru and Kagome are real people in this story, very down to earth. Can't wait for more!


FayeMegan (Chapter 3) - Sat 31 Oct 2009

Yay~ A date! I read this entire chapter aloud to my best friend. My voice was shaking when he was telling her his situation. I have great mental images of Kagome's apartment, I wish I could draw, haha. Can't wait for more!!


Amy (Chapter 3) - Sat 31 Oct 2009

I like it a lot Her are my thoughts and help for editing if you like them

Buyo in ch. 1 is mention but has no inter action with kagome or Sesshomaru till Ch 2 and then that’s it. Either mention him more or eliminate him as a character.

In Ch. 2 the line “lucky charms pajama bottoms rolled up to her well manicured thighs.” The word choice for ‘manicured thighs’ could be better. Manicured implies toes or hands. Even if there is another meaning for the word, readers stumble over it and it messes with the flow of the reading. Try shapely, toned, or well-formed.

In ch. 3 I have read that article!! I loved it! There is one similar to it out now about mummified cats. Look it up.

In ch. 3 the line  “He regarded her for a moment before going back to his apartment and getting his pajama pants and doing his teeth.” The word choice for ‘doing his teeth’ could be a whole lot better if you just say he brushed his teeth. Again it messed with the flow of the reading.

Great job over all. Love the details; many authors miss that.  I also love the Sexy Librarian.

Here’s another pajama idea you know Maria from the Aristocats there is a sexy nighty with her on it- Black boy short panties and black spaghetti string top with Mari the white kitten on it wrapped up in a pink ribbon/bow –like a gift. It be cute against the white dog demon Sesshomaru.


sunset in love (Chapter 3) - Sat 31 Oct 2009

this is one great fic, i truly enjoy myself reading it, poor sesshy, it's just so wrong, but in a way, it is a blessing... a true blessing to be 'placed' in kaggie's care... oh, by the way, inuyasha is gonna trhow tantrum upon knowing this... haha... please update soon


Kurisutaru (Chapter 3) - Fri 30 Oct 2009

I am soo loving this story!!! I especially love the fact that youre keeping everything so realistic!!


Ameire (Chapter 3) - Fri 30 Oct 2009

If I was a squee person, I do believe I would be *squee!* ing right about now

:3 I adored this chapter!! yaha! Finally gettin some response mentally from the so-called iceman. :p kagome's a little naughty isn't she? Taking advantage of a sleeping person, and tsk,tsk, Sesshy has the same (Can it even be called a fault?)....uh..trait. There we go ;3

Thankyou for updating so soon! I'll be waiting on the next chapter. As well as granting you the privelege of my golden tones (errr...that doesn't work over internet does it. Hmmmm...well, you get the picture) 


Asuka-sama (Chapter 3) - Fri 30 Oct 2009

First of all, I am absolutely in love with your story. You're doing such a wonderful job and keep it up! I'm so happy that Sesshomaru finally opened up to Kagome and told her the truth. You put him opening up it just the right part of the story. Sesshomaru should definitely start his own company. That way, he can prove to his father and Inuyasha that he should have been the one to take over the family business.

Omg. I'm so happy that Sesshomaru asked Kagome out! You have to update as soon as possible! I need to know what happens on their date! Again, you're doing such a great job, and I LOVE this story! Update soon! I can't wait! :D


autumngold (Chapter 3) - Fri 30 Oct 2009

You are wonderful!  I love how you are developing the friendship/relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru.  Because of Kagome, Sesshoumaru is starting to get his confidence back.  I'm glad that he is thinking of working someplace else, he definitely has the skills.  I can't wait to read about their date!  Hopefully there won't be any paparazzi there.  I hate to think of what they would say about Kagome.  Please post another chapter soon!  This is an excellent story!


Ameire (Chapter 2) - Thu 29 Oct 2009

This is getting so good. I wish he had watched the movie, but I knew he wouldn't...the prude. Sexy librarian..heh heh heh. I still can't believe he was stripped of a company he spent ten years building and babying. I would kill. Lets see.....I'd start with the smug little bastard that didn't hve to work for it and is probably at the moment running my pet project into the ground...then I'd go for the weak enabler, and last I'd o for the golddigging conniving bitch...hmmm, did I get them all? No, wait, leave the bitch behind but frame her so she lives, but  half life...full of fear and lamenting..


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