Aww. Too cute. Loved it.
Superb! Your words are so evokitive--I can see Sess narrowing his eyes in irritation at the daily inconveniences. Then you masterfully explain his new POV: things do not matter in life, it is the person who matters. There is a big difference between a house and a home. I'm looking forward to more.
autumngold (Chapter 1) - Tue 13 Oct 2009
Beautiful story! I like how in the beginning you can't tell he likes the changes, but the ending shows he loves them. Nice love story!
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