Whoa....didn't see that one coming. I don't think Kagome or Sesshoumaru saw it either. Hmm, how will our hanyou respond to his discovery? I don't know, let's ask our esteemed author....UPDATE SOON PLEASE :)
ENCHANTER12 (Chapter 1) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
I AM CONFUSED. WHO DOES KAGOME LOVE? INUASHA OR SESHOMARU? KOGA? HOJO? AKI-TAKI-HOJO? MAN! WHO DOES SHE TRULY LOVE?!
autumngold (Chapter 5) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
Wow! I feel so spoiled! Thank you so much for the new update! Two in one day is great! :) I do wonder why Sesshoumaru keeps approaching Kagome. Is he keeping an eye out on her or his brother? I mean half-brother. :) I'm glad you're feeling better! Stay well!
(Chapter 5) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
Great work with the conversation between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Looking forward to your next update!
Wispr
(Chapter 4) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
You wrote Inuyasha very well, not over the top at all. Like the fight scene, flowed very smoothly.
Wispr
(Chapter 3) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
Love how you are writing Sesshoumaru's interesting in everything involving Kagome.
Wispr
(Chapter 2) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
Wonderful work with everyone's personalities. Love how you did Rin falling asleep.
Wispr
(Chapter 1) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
A good start... you did a wonderful job with Sesshoumaru's questioning of Kagome. Also great work on describing the scenes in such vivid details.
Wispr
autumngold (Chapter 4) - Wed 21 Oct 2009
Great chapter! Inuyasha is a jerk, why couldn't Sesshoumaru just want to talk to Kagome? Just because he never wants to talk to Inuyasha doesn't mean he doesn't converse. Inuyasha is scary when he transforms, Kagome is lucky she has the beads. But where did she go? Hopefully Sesshoumaru came and saved her! Please update again soon! I really hope you feel better soon! Even though your fever has gone down you still need to take it easy, don't want a relapse!
The whole scene with Rin was fricken cute! >D
Can't wait to see what happens next.
I like it so far :) Please update soon.
chevonne (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
one would thinik after two years that Kagome would have more back bone
Pleaseupdate (Chapter 3) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
I must say that I'm extremely excited for this story. :) Some of my favortie fan fictions have been or are being finished and it really is a bumer that I have nothing new to read. This story will seem to be like a nice long canon chapter story which are my favortie! PLEASE update soon I know you just posted but I can't wait to read the rest of this story!
PS. I hope you feel better soon!
Kanna37 (Chapter 3) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
Okay, I'll bite. I'm definitely curious to see where this is going. So I fell into it hook, line, and sinker. It happens.
Amber
autumngold (Chapter 3) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
Thank you so much for the new chapter, especially while you are sick. I hope you feel better soon! I like how Sesshoumaru is starting to open up more with Kagome, is he getting interested in the future or in her? When you feel better I hope you update soon!
Great chapter and thanks for updating so quickly!!
only flame I would consider sending you would be one to sit under your seat to speed your writing of the next chapter (am I the only one with a mother who is unusually fond of telling me I need to "light a fire under your ass to get things moving" (yes my mom swears at me lol its a love thing))
autumngold (Chapter 2) - Wed 07 Oct 2009
This is a very interesting story. I like Sesshoumaru's questions about the future. I wonder if he is thinking about how he can change it? I hope Sesshoumaru and Kagome get to spend more time together. Please update soon!
REDWOLF (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Oct 2009
Sesshoumaru sure is a puzzle here! I really like the chapter!
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