Gah! That was awesome can't wait till the next chapter. Very cute last scene. :D
Hey there! Aubrey here, and I'd like to say that I'm thoroughly enjoying your story so far! The characters are very well developed, and I'm enjoying the interaction between Kagome and Sesshomaru. All in all, you're doing a wonderful job, and I'll be waiting semi-patiently for the next chapter! Good luck, and keep up the good work! ~Aubrey
just a fan... (Chapter 8) - Wed 02 Dec 2009
Awesome story! Keep going! I can't wait for the next chapter! Wonderful plot!
Saholia (Chapter 8) - Wed 02 Dec 2009
YAY!! It worked! :D Hope you update soon xD
again, wow... wat a chapter! I keep thinking while i read 'i wonder wats gunna happen in the next chapter' but when i finish the chappie, the button doesnt go to another chapter!!!! dammit... i just hope 'world domination' wasnt his plan LOL cuz i think machine guns would end his life before that ever happened '^^
Great writing once again, and ill be looking forward for the next one!
anon (Chapter 8) - Wed 02 Dec 2009
evil woman -.- You stopped at the best part.
Cool. I'm curious how Sessho will react to the modern era. Make him sit in a car XD
Very interesting and I must say I loved the kiss followed by soap drama, very nice touch. I'm a bit anxious actually to see if Sesshomaru will be allowed through the well ::shrug:: Guess I have to wait till next chapter :)
More! Must have more! lol j/k Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one. :)
Seee, THIS is why I usually read only completed stories! It's killing me to want to know what happens next!!!! lol
Update soon! *big begging puppy eyes* pp.. pp.. ppp.. please!!! *whining and sniffling*
yeah that was bugging me as well, what did she forget? and then he plants a heck of a liplock on her?
Need..more..story soon........or I'll keep....holding my .....breath!
(Please hurry I don't look good in that shade of blue!)
Love the story. can't wait to see where it goes. and the kiss? Wowza!!!!
I keep thinking about the fact that she could not heal herself in a previous chapter. I was always frustrated with the anime because they never let her train as a miko should to become stronger, such as being able to heal whether it be herself or others. She never made time to train, just depending on someone else to always save her. She should be strong enough to at least protect herself. I'm ecstatic that Sesshoumaru has both arms. I yelled at Inuyasha when he took his arm in the anime. I know he eventually got it back with Backusaiga but it just took so long. You've got me real curious as to who has the last shard. Are they going to be a new character or someone they've met along the way.
Saholia (Chapter 7) - Mon 30 Nov 2009
OMG Star--update! :D I can't wait to see if the well will work for him or not xD
this is an awesome story. i like how you kept sesshoumaru's character almost perfectly. kagome seems really in character as well.. great job on that. its not everyday i read a story as well written. ill be looking forward to your next updates with anxiety.
you're a good writter, keep up the good work!
Sassy C (Chapter 6) - Fri 20 Nov 2009
“You asked why I continued to seek you out.” Kagome tried to read his features unsuccessfully. He stepped close, earning a squeak from her as she matched the step, moving away. “Humans forget easily.”
AND THEN HE KISSED HER?!?!
What? What did she forget? And HOW could she have forgotten something like THAT?! Ack, you must update as soon as humanly possible. You have me hooked, hooked, hooked on this story and your amazing writing!
--Sassy C
Kanna37 (Chapter 6) - Fri 20 Nov 2009
Hmm. Cliffie. (sighs) I have been guilty of using such in my own stories, so I suppose I should not complain... damn it.
Amber
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