this was HILARIOUS! though now while i know he's not a mammal based demon, i'm curious if naraku might have some sort of funny reaction to the 'little red demon'
“Have you seen a glowing red demon?”
The bottom of her stomach dropped out, and, in amazement, she stared up at the daiyoukai. “Wha-?”
Sesshou-Maru’s eyes narrowed, and she squirmed uncomfortably. “A demon, priestess, a demon. Small and red, flitting about this area. I have been trying to kill it for hours now.” <--- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMFG your awesome i tell you AWESOME!!!!
I know you have completed this and started another fic. But reading this I thought of another tid bit. What if Sesshoumaru lives to the modern era and learns about where Kagome comes from? And then learns what the red demon really was?
Just giving you some inspiration. Love you work.
swift death (Chapter 2) - Sat 17 Jul 2010
hahahahahah! i nearly wet by pants from laughing, great strory, can't stop smilling even now, great job :)
autumngold (Chapter 2) - Sun 25 Oct 2009
I think that Kagome should definitely not return to the past. If Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha talk, Kagome will be killed. Great update!
Oh Gosh!!! That had me laughing so hard!! My dogs love the laser light! They cant get enough of it!!
Diane (Chapter 2) - Sun 25 Oct 2009
Snort, this I would love to see. I actually bought 1 of these shaped like a mouse, neither cat nor dog is interested in it.
xD Oh wow, that's hilarious. Priceless, honestly.
*dies laughing* Omg, that was great! Hahaha, I enjoyed it. The little red demon. Hm. So Sesshomaru-like. <3
that was priceless...I could just see that too!
Oh, there's going to be lots of blood and hurting in the next chapter.
Fairqueen (Chapter 1) - Tue 29 Sep 2009
omg this was so funny. but the truly scare part is i can see Sess chasing after the little red dot. but what's going to happen with he changes back to human form?? this could be fun :)
autumngold (Chapter 1) - Tue 29 Sep 2009
I fear for Kagome's life when Sesshoumaru figures out what she did. But I can just imagine how funny it must have looked with Sesshoumaru chasing the little red dot. Unfortunately, my car has figured it out, and while he like watching the light, he watches my hand too. I can never fool him. Can't wait for the next part of your story!
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