You. Are. Amazing. You do the one thing that is the most difficult to do in fanfics: funny sadness. I’m going to use the V-day chappie as an example. Kagome is so jaded about V-day (not that I blame her…). Sesshoumaru says that she’s only like this because she never gets any chocolates. He’s somewhat right, although I think Kagome does feel that all the chocolate and flowers are a bit crass. The scene itself was funny, but it made me think: how many times has Kagome been shunned because people like her sister better. I like that you don’t demonize Kikyo and also make the mood light (because that’s just the type of person Kagome is). But, inside, Kagome has her own insecurities. Little things can hurt a lot. Now that Sesshoumaru is here, I think Kagome is a little confused. She’s definitely attracted to him, and she knows she likes to talk to him…when he’s not so much an ass. But, I have this bad feeling that Sesshoumaru will say something stupid that will drive Kagome away. Ah the drama!! ^__^ Gotta love it! This is really entertaining to read! Great job!
Happy Valentine's Day to you too. I have got to say that I enjoyed this chappie very much. And I sorta feel sorry for Inuyasha. But the twins did warn him ahead of time. I look forward to future holiday themed chappies. I think St. Patrick's Day is coming up soon. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
REDWOLF (Chapter 18) - Sun 14 Feb 2010
Awwwwwwww, this was just so cute and funny!
REDWOLF (Chapter 17) - Tue 09 Feb 2010
This is such a fantastic fic......I hope you win;)
Never Let Them See You Cry A.K.A. (Shannah Terry) (Chapter 17) - Tue 09 Feb 2010
hey i loved this u must update again really soon
sorry i was to lazy to log in lol its 12:35am and i got school so yea sorry :) LOVE YOUR FIC THOUGH SO UPDATE AGAIN SOON
connie (Chapter 17) - Mon 08 Feb 2010
eeeeee! so cuteee and sexyyy :DDD
I love crazy Grandma! Great chapter!
Maybe it was a good thing that grandma came to visit? But I have to say that Hide is friends with some very interesting people. And I'm very surprised that Naraku didn't go through with his plan for revenge. And it was about damn time that Sesshou made a move on Kagome. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
Awwww, Sesshy is jealous again! Loved this chapter! Can't wait for the next!
Interesting. It's nice to know that the old crowd Kagome hung out with is willing to let her go and not hate her for it. And I'm just curious about one thing, is the girl supposed to be Yura or Yuka? Because at the beginning of the chappie you used Yura and towards the end it became Yuka. So I just want you to clarify if it's Yura or Yuka. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
update soon ^^
Amazing i love this soo much u have to write more soon its my new favorite fanfiction thank you for writing it i cant wait for more
Oh my gosh, Hojo is getting on my nerves. I'm glad that Sess out him in his place though! Can't wait for another update!
Sala (Chapter 15) - Sun 24 Jan 2010
You have several homophones in this chapter which need fixing. :) Like "night"/"knight"
Sprinks (Chapter 14) - Mon 18 Jan 2010
hehe i am LOVING THIS STORY!
xoxo
update soon!
REDWOLF (Chapter 14) - Sun 17 Jan 2010
it was great!
Awww so cute...and funny! Those evil masterminds setting up a date! I love it!
connie (Chapter 14) - Sun 17 Jan 2010
teehee sesshoumaru playing cupid :D
Could you do fanart of the billboards of Sesshou and Inuyasha? I would love to see what had fan girls stampeding down the streets. *Evil Grin* I wonder if Kagome would go through the same thing if there were billboards of her... what would Sesshou think of all the guys hounding her? And what would the snobby girls have to say? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
Saholia (Chapter 13) - Sun 10 Jan 2010
Ouh-The suspense! Awesome chapter! :D
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