that was fantastic. i liked it so much. i don't usually like original character, but the whole thing was great.
FANTASTIC!!! I loved this story. I had to fight my tears while I was reading through it. I particularly love that you explained all his timetravel adventures in the end. My heart weeps for Tenshi, Kagome, and Sesshomaru. I'm just glad their was a happy ending, I'm a sucker for those. :)
Genocide of the unfaithful (Chapter 10) - Sat 27 Feb 2010
starry sky right? autumn and summer right? do i get a cookie?
mary (Chapter 10) - Fri 26 Feb 2010
it was a wonderful epilogue. thanks for making tenshi finally come home. it saddened me that he had to go through all that pain. no one actually wants to experience any of it. but there is always a greater will independent of our own. i guess the saying nothing truly worthwhile ever comes easy. *sigh* makes you want to curl up in your bed and just be grateful for what you have. makes you want to hug your mom. makes you wistful.
till the next adventure cloud...
Eddward (Chapter 10) - Fri 26 Feb 2010
Sooooo goooood!!!!! It's nice to come across such a fantastic story. You're such a wonderful storyteller and your work reminds me why I keep looking for the true gems out there. Stumbling across this story makes me want to look into your other ones now. Well, maybe after a few z's, as I stayed up after bedtime reading! Oh, oh! and I hope I can put in a request for a chocolate chip cookie if I state that Iku and Azusa are from Rinseternalsoul's Violation of Honor. (That was really nifty how you slide them in there, by the way. I didn't even notice the reference at first, but after I did I wanted to hit my forhead and say "duh"!)
Violation of Honor by Rinseternalsoul
Thank you for this one more chapter. It makes the story perfect and brings it to a good ending. And leaves me crying. Heavens, I'm becoming a sob sister. Thank you for a very good story.
this makes me want to cry, and i kinda hope that Kage, decides he's going to kill the sun goddess, that... would rock :3
Aside from the time paradox, I think that this has been one of the best fics I've read in a long while. I am glad that you finally explained the time travelling curse but I am sad to see this story end. Will you consider doing a sequel? I am curious about Kage's life and the lives of the children that Kagome and Sesshou end up having. And I would like to know what happens after Tenshi finally returns to his original timeline. Keep up the amazing work and update soon. :P
awwwwwwww....i hope we'll get a nice long chapter where everyone welcomes tenshi back into the family...hope they can make up for all the time he had to spend alone
mary (Chapter 9) - Tue 23 Feb 2010
time paradoxes, they will always confuse me. maybe because we're not supposed to mess with time. we don't have that right. *sigh* we always want to not experience pain.
it was a nice read. thanks for the ride!
O_O your not allowed to be done! we need to see a homecoming! EPILOGUE!!! *pounce syou for more*
mary (Chapter 8) - Tue 23 Feb 2010
i'm on pins and needles here. what'll happen next? what's tenshi's goal anyway? is it to save kagome? or his family? why all the time jumps? so many questions! i hope they will be answered soon. like i said, on pins and needles here! big gigantic, humongous needles!
Will you ever explain Tenshi's curse? How did he come to time travel uncontrollably? And I am starting to think that having mutiple Tenshi's will become confusing. Can you give more background info about Tenshi? And can you go into detail about why he seems so broken? How was his friend's death his fault? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
o.o his mother shot him @_@ thats not nice at all! but i did love this and i cant wait for more!
This was so heartbreakingly beautiful a chapter. I love this story so very much. I hope that Tenshi will eventually make it home to his beloveds.
Awesome chapter! I really liked the ending. ^_^
So did the black plague actually reach Feudal Japan? And what's the deal with Tenshi's vanishing act through time? Why does he get pulled through time to help Kagome and Sesshou? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
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