I really like your story as it is very interesting. I am confused about one thing though? Is Senkenki a unicorn or a deer?

I love this story. It's one of my faves...and I understand why people don't review it as much...They're lazy.

I really like this story. I started to read it and could not for the life of me stop, and now it is 5am. I blame my lack of sleep on a well writen story. Keep up the good work.

It's a great story so far,I clicked on the link to see the picture only to find that I couldn't access it though.

So sorry it took me so long to read this chapter. I am curious to see what the slithery onlooker does with this information. It should be interesting at the very least. Your grammar continues to improve! See you next chapter.

Great story! I'm really enjoying it. The characterisations are great. I don't know if you realised, but the entirety of chapter 9, from the art link to the end of the chapter, all wound up as part of the link. so it's all in blue and hyperlinked. Also, for whatever reason, the link didn't work when I clicked it. Not griping, just thought you'd like to know.

This is one of my favorite stories here! I absolutely love it, and I wait eagerly for the next chapter.

I could not tell you why others do not review this story much. Only yesterday I found this story myself and decided to read through to your latest chapter before reviewing. Quite honestly, I am enamored with the story. It is an honest depiction of what one might believe the Dog Lord is feeling; and the Priestess' experiences, though tragic, are true to the nature of the original Manga. It is also extremely impressive to see your progression as a writer, especially knowing that English is a second language for you. If you have not yet done so, I would suggest going back and reading this story yourself. As the writer, you will be better able to see the fine feathered changes in your writing styles and abilities. In only these 10 chapters, you have improved greatly! You should see many more reviews soon, I am sure. But then, it also depends on how many readers have seen the story at all. Dokuga, while popular, is still one of the lesser known fandom sites for this Manga/Anime and character couple. And while the following of this particular couple has grown exponentially in the last decade, there are still many fans that do not know of sites like this. Have patience. Your story will get the reviews it so deserves in time. You are doing an excellent job with wonderful improvements. There are a lot of great authors out there, many of which I am personally acquainted and enjoy sharing new stories with. You are quickly becoming one of those great writers, and I am happy to share this story with my friends so that they may see what you can do. I will see you with the new chapter when it arrives.

I'll be honest, I follow this story more closely than WDBM. Not that I have anything against it, but this story absolutely seduced me with its tender characterizations and gorgeous writing. I love the steady, lilting pace you've set. Their interaction and growing affection seems very natural. I'm always excited to see an update of this story, so please keep up the great work! ^^

I love this fic. Althought I was hoping to read of their first morning bath together. But other than that, it's a great read. Looking at Sesshoumaru's thoughts and how he is making the progress toward loving Kagome. I like this. Some writers make the transition from hate to love happen too fast. And maybe that is why your reviews are very many, they are waiting for him to make a more permenante move on her. Any ways, thanks for the great read. later.

J'adore 'when the sun rises'! C'est manifique! haha, yes I need practice...Anyway, I have no Idea WHY there are so few reviews for this story...I know I love it! I especially enjoyed Sess's inner musings toward the end of the chapter. Keep it up...it is wonderful! A bientot!