LOL i love Kirara's personality! I think it stays pretty true to her animal form (:
Great story please update soon!
SessKag<3 (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Aug 2011
DUDE. I'm already LOVING this!
very nice chapter, can't wait til the next one. wonder what Shippo and the others will say about Kirara's new form? or what the story you hinted at is about it
Absolutely, positively loved it. Your descriptions send my imagination into overdrive. I can't wait for more.
NAO-chan33 (Chapter 14) - Tue 22 Dec 2009
*gasp* I really like this fic. :D Can't wait until Sesshoumaru and Kagome start to see each other... what's the correct term for it... intimiately? romantically? Yeah. :D lol Keep up the great work! Can't wait until the next one!
--nao-chan
| This story is so freaking good :P You must update SOOOON!!!
[Lmao, kirin means giraffe in japanese xD]
| Hello there!
Well, I have to say that I could hardly tell that you might've had problems with English, except in the last chapter, where you had a few mistakes. And this story is indeed written wonderfully... So wonderfully, in fact, that I went to click on the next chapter, and I was a bit shocked when there wasn't one.
Anyway, you've done a wonderful job, and I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter!
p.s. - Thanks for your review on my story; I'm glad I could portray Sesshomaru correctly enough, especially so much so that someone who has an award for getting him right tells me that I did a fairly good job! Thanks again!
MLMonty (Chapter 14) - Fri 06 Feb 2009
Any chance of you continuing this? I rather like it.
| I love it
I hope that you can update when your able. and congrats aboutthe puppies..
Kousagi (Chapter 14) - Sun 21 Dec 2008
| Aw, man... I was all ready to hit the next button too. Please update! I really want to know how this is going to end.
Shamson (Chapter 14) - Tue 25 Nov 2008
Wow. Its great! I started reading it and couldnt stop till I was finished. You can't imagine my dissapointment when I looked for the next chapter button and there wasnt one. I look forward to what happens when kagome finally meets up with her friends.
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Krystina (Chapter 14) - Tue 26 Aug 2008
| This is a very interesting story, especially with what you've come up with for your OCs!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
MLMonty (Chapter 14) - Thu 07 Aug 2008
| I like this one better than 'White Dog, Blue Moon' but I still like 'Whispers behind rice paper walls' best. I'm looking forward to updates to both. Oh, I loved Kagome calling Sesshoumaru brother in Wbrpw. I couldn't help but remember the dirty look he gives her in the manga when she does and her pouting when I read it. LOL. If you need someone to bounce ideas off of let me know. ;)
| Congratulations on your nomination for this story!
| Wow! Kirara in humanoid form, breaking seals, a Kirin, the spirit of a willow tree, and what's this about the golden scroll? Oh you so have hooked. I know all about the muses taking vacations my friend. BTW, mine wasn't too happy when I confronted her about her topless tanning incident. But in penance she's working with me again. Thanks for the blackmail!
Lena (Chapter 14) - Sun 27 Jul 2008
| I love this story and I cannot get enough of it. I found it and read all 14 chapters in about three days (or something like that). Keep up the great work and update soon.
elley (Chapter 6) - Sat 26 Jul 2008
| Well, I agree that this fic has beautiful writing. I am enjoying the read. But I have to say that I skimmed through White Dog Blue Moon and that seems to attract me more. I will definitely continue reading both fics and check out your other works too.
| Wow. I just got around to reading some stories on dokuga. I switched over from Single Spark. This is great. I love your descriptions, especially of the last battle and how it wasn't really how they expected it. I had to review after the first chapter because I know I won't pause again until I read the rest.
| 'A tail? A wing? His hair?' oh I laughed out loud at that line. Another of my favorites, 'He was probably only discovering his new compassionate heart, prodding it's boundaries and functionalities with a blindfold and a crooked cane.' You have such wonderful lines in this piece.
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