Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Lauren (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

Hazzah! *feels smart* Well, I'm sad for Sesshomaru. I hope he hasn't misinterpreted Kagome's disappearence for something it wasn't. She had to hide the truth from him. And Hisoka-sensei was the only one that could have helped her get back without any extreme damage being sustained to the time-line. I mean, Kagome obviously figured out that he had to have been the one to send her back in the first place. So it was fine for Hisoka to know the truth about Kagome. He has to repeat his job in the future anyway, right?

I do wonder what Sesshomaru's mother was talking about though. "Finish"... "Finish" what? The ceremony? But wouldn't the ceremony include Hisoka-sensei too? Does that mean he never went back? ...Well, he couldn't have, right? Sesshomaru would have been too hurt and his mother would've used that opportunity to correct her husband's mistake and kill the cat, if only for the slant. *sigh* Wait. Does that mean they'll have to find Hisoka too? And I still want to know who that annoying/strange boy was on the shrine. What's his connection to all of this?

Well,in any case. Another great "chapter". I love the way you split it up into four parts, playing with the rhyme. *feels nostaglic* I hope you enjoy your weekend! ^^

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


Rowdys girl (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

WAH!!!!!! *Busily lays out chains necessary to chain Forthy to her computer until the story is finished* THIS is a wonderful step forward in the tale. You know I'm going to be whining until you post the next chapter!


Anonymous (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

i think the bitch likes seshomaru in an incestuous way. ewe!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

WHOA O_O you s0o0o0o0o make me hyper and a gigglepants!! i cant wait to see what happens, and finish what was started? omfg  >:3


Rikayu (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

I think by far, this is my favorite chapter!  The chapter being divided into mini-drabbles by the lyrics to the rhyme is something that just adds to how well written this is!  

The plot thickens and I am pulled in deeper!  Uwaaaahh, I can't wait for what comes next!


kagomesirene (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

>.<

happy family reunion XD

i'm sooooooooooo happy that hisoka-sensei is still alive X )

and i'm sure once he explains whatever happened in the past to sesshoumaru, they'll be close again...

...i can't wait to read more soon....so pretty please keep up the great work and update soon soon sooooooon!!


Tisha (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

you know this is getting better and better by the chapter.  can't wait to see what's next has the plot turns juicy!  Update soon!


Melly (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

And the plot thickens... I wonder if Hisoka-sensei tried to help Kagome make it back through the well?  Oh, and I loved the section headers!  Please update soon!  I can't wait to read the next part with Hisoka-sensei!!!!!!! XDDD


Karli (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

Ok what happened with the CAT? and why did he take Kagome???  Finish what he started???

loving the story as always mate.


Kanna37 (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

Ahhh...now I see how you're going to work the plot into canon - I had wondered.  Awesome!

Amber


GreyEcho (Chapter 42) - Wed 21 Apr 2010

I liked he how he reacted to Inuyasha use of her name. And know I'm curious about the castle in the sky. Is Hisoka there?


loveyaa (Chapter 42) - Wed 21 Apr 2010

I can't wait to see where both stories are going and how they are going to meet up (again). eagerly awaiting the next time with the castle in the sky :)


jgem (Chapter 42) - Wed 21 Apr 2010

Oooooo! The return of Inu-mama! I wonder what wonderfully astute, tongue-in-cheek comments she will have for her son (and the Inuyasha gang). 

I can't wait to see Sesshoumaru's thoughts once he realizes his Higurashi is Kagome. 


Melly (Chapter 42) - Wed 21 Apr 2010

Awesome, as always!


Addy (Chapter 42) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

Cool update, I really look forward to the next one!


88pieces (Chapter 42) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

ooooo   i cant wait for the next one


Debra Timson (Chapter 42) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

Yay!!! You updated! I love this story. Please update again soon and when will you start writing from Kagome's side again?


KEdakumi (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

This is one of my favorite stories.  Can't wait to read more!


Elly (Chapter 42) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

Excellent. Feels like there's some progress being made in the plot line. I enjoy this story so much.


knifethrower (Chapter 42) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

Sesshy is taking InuYasha and co. to the Cloud Palace?  Where they will encounter Sesshy Mama?  Holy cats, can't wait to get knowed up on that!


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