Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Ameire (Chapter 11) - Fri 30 Oct 2009

I love the way this is turning out. The child Seshhoumaru is just so adorable. He'll probably be sad when she does leave. She was his after all...

I wonder what a pouting or sulking sesshou would look like?


GreyEcho (Chapter 11) - Fri 30 Oct 2009

:D

 

I totally didn't realized it till you pointed it out. lol that was cute. I also like how Kagome was annoyed at being called slow. I'd be annoyed too if called slow. I'm glade you updated so soon! I'm completely and utterly addicted to this fic. Well your other ones too. But I REALLY like this one with kid sessh. And I like your take on Inu papa and the flow and well everything! I can't wait to see what happens next!

 

~lune


theunknownchild (Chapter 1) - Fri 30 Oct 2009

So, I had to read the end a few times to get it, and then I felt like an idiot. I love your drabbles so much, I cannot wait for the next one. It is so refreshing to read a story that has a great plot filled with great writing and proper grammer. I tip my hat to you :)


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 11) - Fri 30 Oct 2009

he dresses RIN like he dresses Kagome! >:3 loves!


jgem (Chapter 11) - Fri 30 Oct 2009

I loved how you tied Rin and Jakken into the story with Kagome and Hisoka-sensei. Since you had mentioned the blue blocked patterned kimono twice, I was starting to wonder about its significance, as you do not waste your words with descriptions that are not necessary. It just took the ending of the chapter to hit me over the head with its significance.

Three chapters in a week's time...your spoiling me!


autumngold (Chapter 11) - Fri 30 Oct 2009

Good update.  I can't wait for Kagome to meet Sesshoumaru's dad!  Hopefully he will treat her well.  Can't wait for more!


17th Floor (Chapter 11) - Fri 30 Oct 2009

I.love.your.writing.

 

 


Debra Timson (Chapter 10) - Thu 29 Oct 2009

Wow! This is great so far! I wanna read more so PLEASE update soon!


rosedream (Chapter 10) - Wed 28 Oct 2009

Oh my gosh I thought your last story about Sess as a butler and all was the best!  but I have to say that right now I have a fangirl squeel!  This story is awsome!!!


GreyEcho (Chapter 10) - Wed 28 Oct 2009

>.< You have the best last lines! That last scene was so sweet!!!!!!! He really does want to know it. I liked how he'd find a safe spot to learn it. >D GaH! I love your fic!


Kula (Chapter 10) - Tue 27 Oct 2009

I love this story, I will be eagerly waiting for your next update.


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 10) - Tue 27 Oct 2009

cuute~~~!!!  X3

I love this fic. sooo much...


Dani (Chapter 10) - Tue 27 Oct 2009

He sounds so adorable in a scary grown-up way. I wish I could get a hold of him. You are doing a great job with this story!


knifethrower (Chapter 10) - Tue 27 Oct 2009

Sweeeet!


Couldntbekeener3 (Chapter 10) - Tue 27 Oct 2009

AHHHHH So Cute!!!! Love it!


Samantha (Chapter 10) - Tue 27 Oct 2009

Wow I could feel the intensity of that chapter.  Even though it's a cute little Sesshoumaru it does nothing to dampen his intense aura!  Please continue to update this is steady fast becoming my favorite story.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 10) - Tue 27 Oct 2009

i love this sory :3


AmIOtaku (Chapter 10) - Tue 27 Oct 2009

Okay, I probably shouldn't think this because it's Little Sess... but I'd get a little dithered too if he was whispering in my ear.  Just because I'd remember his older self, and think "oohh, is this how his breath would feel against as an adult?"

Anyway, loved this chapter and I'm anticipating her arrival at the fortress.  What will everyone thinkg?  How will they act?  Will Sess be "snubbed" because he didn't do his rite of passage?  Will Kagome's appearance get anyone to rethink (dad) postition on humans?  Will her care of by Sess "excuse" his "failure"?  So many questions!!!!

 


autumngold (Chapter 10) - Tue 27 Oct 2009

Young Sesshoumaru is so much like his older self, well except that he doesn't hate humans yet.  Is it Kagome's actions which will cause this to happen?  I hope not, because he is taking such good care of her.  Thank you for the update!  Please update with another chapter soon!


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 9) - Mon 26 Oct 2009

loved it update again soon :) his exception that sounds kinda romantic lmao


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