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Reviews for Seclusion by Oroyukae

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REDWOLF (Chapter 58) - Mon 19 Oct 2009

Great chapter. Inuyasha can be a pain at times (lol)


Madeline (Chapter 58) - Mon 19 Oct 2009

Thats right nothing wrong with Smacking Inuyasha around! I love the chapter can't wait for the next one!! Keep up the great work!! :D


Snowfall (Chapter 57) - Sun 18 Oct 2009

Sorry I haven't been reviewing--been sick.  These past few chapters have been very intriguing...and hot!  ^_^  I loved your description of Sesshoumaru's emotions and of his youki when he dressed up.  What I'm wondering is, won't that attract attention?  Won't others feel his youki?  Regardless, I loved it.  I also wondered if the other youkai would treat him as a lord if he came out of hiding from them.  I'm sure that he's still the most powerful of them all.  What is happening with the girl who is attempting to get information is sad.  I hope she can get out of it.  Maybe Hunter can save her from the bad guys.  Anyway, can't wait to see what you do with that.  I'm so glad that someone is giving Kagome's mother some of the attention she deserves.  Thanks for that and for continuing to post.  ^_^


knifethrower (Chapter 57) - Sun 18 Oct 2009

Kya might be a plant.  That was a good idea, I was thinking the good guys were all too good and the bad guys were all too bad.  Kya will mix it up a little.  I like the idea of betrayal, it adds spice to the story...


Madeline (Chapter 57) - Sun 18 Oct 2009

Very cute! I love Sesshy dressing up for Kagome!! :D Can't wait read more! Keep up the amazing work and update soon!! :D


Tana_san (Chapter 57) - Sun 18 Oct 2009

Oops sorry about that. I always fill in the spambot first and my finger hit the enter key when I adjusted the comp on my lap. Anway...I knew Sesshoumaru would get some kind of de ja vu from putting on those clothes. It was the height of his life then and to be able to stand there free and open to the world once again must have been awesome. I know Kagome was most appreciative. I could just imagine the top of that mountain and the moon with the new Spring air. Beautiful. I was hoping that maybe Kya would fess up to Masaru before she got too involved in this but maybe it could be a blessing if Hunter can intercept her before she's found out. I just hope it's before she's forced to tell anything to Kenta. Souta's girlfriend isn't invovled is she? You never mentioned it but it's just gave me pause to think that Kya called her friend to meet Souta. Hopefully not. Until the next chapter.  JEN

 


Tana_san (Chapter 57) - Sun 18 Oct 2009

(Chapter 56) - Thu 15 Oct 2009

Hello!

I have no idea if I have ever reviewed for this story or not............but I felt I should since i've been reading it for awhile. I sorry I haven't done it sooner.......but Chemistry and Math are kicking my behind at the moment and I never seem to have time to really do anything other then check quick for updates and study!

I must tell you that their are a few character's that just bring this story together. Among them is Kagome, Sesshoumaru and the interaction between the two in this story/fanfic. I feel you have displayed Sesshoumaru's character in it's truest form! You definitely feel the love, devotion from the two. I also like Masaru's character in this one. He's innocent in a sweet way, and only wants the adults in his life to be happy........he really helps the story come together with his intereactions with Kagome and Sesshoumaru.

Kenta's a bad apple! But, he's just one of those characters you love to hate.......Yoshirou falls into the same pot. His (kenta's) insanity really add's some foreboding in this story. We all know he's going after kagome......but because he's beside himself with hate that he becoming, if not already is psychotic, and unpredictable. That adds a really spin on everything, cause' were not quite sure what twisted idea he'll come up with.

Overall though, This story is one of my favorite's here on Dokuga(of course I like a lot of your stories)! Your one of the few author's I bother to read/review for...... You have a talent girl, and I'm always looking forward to seeing what you've come up with next.

 

 

Take care,

 

Soraslove, (a.k.a. Cheryl H.)

 

 


REDWOLF (Chapter 56) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

Fantastic chapter. I just can't wait until those brothers meet the REAL Sesshoumaru! 


knifethrower (Chapter 56) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

I'm not sure if she is wandering off into danger, or some kind of escapade.  Does that qualify as a cliffhanger?  Either way, update soon so we can find out.


Tana_san (Chapter 56) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

It's good that Satomi is going to give their relationship another chance. Since Hunter was able to convince her he isn't working for the mob or anything and what he does is legit, maybe she'll allow herself to be happy after all these years of being alone. It looks like Kenta and his vendetta just took on a new meaning. Kenta is really one twisted character and if his brother has any sense, he'll try to put a stop to this before Kenta and maybe himself end up dead like Yoshirou. I think Kya needs to tell Masaru that Kenta tried to bribe her and that she just couldn't hurt him like that. If she confesses now using the right words Masaru will help get InuYasha to protect her too. She hasn't betrayed Masaru yet and after all Kenta has done, she is going to need protecting from him because she will be a liability to Kenta after he gets the information he wants. This is getting good. Love, intrigue, drama... wonderful! JEN


Tana_san (Chapter 55) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

So, the girlfriend is a plant. I was hoping not but it makes more sense that she would be. I am happy that she's regretting doing it though. Masaru is going to be crushed. I thought Kagome wanting to see Sesshoumaru in full battle regalia was funny, but  then I think I'd be curious too. And seeing a picture, wow!...he actually made it into the history books. And then when you mentioned that Satomi had a date and Kags and Sessh decided to stay home for 'alone time", I thought there would be a perfect opportunity for the two couples to run into each other but the way you put it...now that was grand! That exact thing happened to my father and my aunt when they were younger and he thought she was mom because she was wearing mom's clothes and well, thank God he didn't grab her butt or squeeze her boobs like he was known to always do...Well now Hunter knows Sesshoumaru is still alive. Like I said, he knows an awful lot about youkai and is using technology to subdue them,so that in it's self says alot about him. They aren't just some kind of hobby. Yeah, I know, I keep harping on this...guess, my curioustiy won't be satisfied until you tell me if I'm right or on the right track. Great work, my firend. See you again soon.  JEN


Madeline (Chapter 55) - Mon 12 Oct 2009

Awww baby love :D and Mommy love!! Wonderful chapter! I can't wait to figure out what's going on with the girls!!! Update soon! And thanks a bunch for writing a great story!!! :D


1CarinoInu (Chapter 55) - Sun 11 Oct 2009

Okay, I had to laugh at this update.  There were some truly fabulous moments here that really pulled a chuckle from me.  This is a really fabulous story - I look forward to the next one :)


REDWOLF (Chapter 55) - Sun 11 Oct 2009

I am so glad that Hunter is afraid of Sesshoumaru! This is great!! I was beginning to think that Hunter had something to stop youkai, I guess just the less stronger ones...huh? Great chapter!


snowbird (Chapter 53) - Sat 10 Oct 2009

Why is Satomi so against what Hunter does for a living?  It doesn't sound so bad to me.  So he's had to kill a few people.  She should listen to Kagome.  She's stupid if she turns him away again and deserves a broken heart.


Tana_san (Chapter 53) - Sat 10 Oct 2009

Ok, Lady O, now you just have me overly curious as to what Hunter does for a living. I think he was sugar coating things for Kagome so she wouldn't worry over her mother being with him...but, what he did to InuYasha without Inu knowing he was there and the bracelet/band that was able to bind him powerless, now that speaks alot to me. I think he's into high tech criminal investigations. He doesn't seem like a bad guy but what do I know? If Satomi knows that he stole things and has killed before, how is it she doesn't know what he does? Is that why she made him leave, because  he wouldn't tell her the truth about what it is he does? In every fic I've read, Ms. H always seems to 'know' people, good or bad. She' a quiet and modest type but highly intelligent. I can see her being angry if she found out her impression of him was wrong, she would feel betrayed. But I honestly think she needs to do some serious talking with this guy because it's quite obvious they love one another and Souta has a great respect for him, as well as Kagome. He also knows about youkai, so knowing about Sesshoumaru might not be a problem seeing as he didn't hurt InuYasha...unless you want to count hurting his feelings...Hmm, so, yeah, I guess I'd better go for now. PJ is taking up writing oneshots and ficlets for Labyrinth on FF.net. She's totally into Jareth. I told her he's a rock idol from my era. If you'd like to check it out her name is Shinku. So, I'm off!  JEN


Madeline (Chapter 53) - Fri 09 Oct 2009

Aww I like Hunter! Very cute! I like that your giving Kagome's mom some love as well! Hardly anyone does that and I think its cute! Great Chapter Can't wait to see what happen next!! :D


knifethrower (Chapter 53) - Fri 09 Oct 2009

I like your original character "Hunter".  I would rather not see Kagome's mom with a demon, it just seems too pat.  But Hunter is a very cool character, and tough even though he is not a demon.  I think he adds a lot to the story.


REDWOLF (Chapter 53) - Fri 09 Oct 2009

Sesshoumaru is strange here, even though he's so powerful, he acts like he has such worry for Kagome. I hope some Kagome power comes into play soon, so, Sesshoumaru can see just how strong Kagome is! A mother protecting her young become so much stronger, don't ya think?? Great Chapter! I was looking forward to it!


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