Wow this fiction is wow, in purely good way of course! Seriously I never would have thought of a shock collar for miko's maybe daiyoukai's but not miko's. There were so many lovable moments in each chapter (I particularly loved the love tap, wolf battering ram, he beat our record!, Kagome trying out Miroku's line, and of course Rin and Shippo re-enacting Sango's beating of Miroku "My dear Sango, I swear you are the only woman for me!") I was laughing all the way through this! I hope you update soon so there are more laughs to be had! Until then I shall just keep re-reading it, and re-reading it because this won't get old anytime soon I know that much! Thanks writing this, because this fic was a great pick-me-up for my bad day (even thought thats not its real purpose - I think - but I appreciate it none the less).
You're a wonderful writer So don't doubt yourself, once more thank you for writing this and I hope another chapter in this epic tale comes out soon!
r0o demands more! >:3
Caitlin (Chapter 5) - Mon 25 Jan 2010
Hahaha poor Jaken!! I don't think that he understands that Sesshoumaru is STRAIGHT!! Ha! Anyway, I LOVE this fic! I was just browsing around when I found it, and I must say that I like the idea of a more mischevious Sesshoumaru wanting to keep the necklace on :). Can't wait to read more!!! GREAT job so far!!!!
lol this was a funny chapter :) it'll be interesting to see what happens in the future :)
lmao! Inuyasha is priceless! Great chapter, especially oved Jaken's and Inuyasha's reactions.
autumngold (Chapter 5) - Mon 28 Dec 2009
Love the update! I can't wait to find out whether Sesshoumaru figures out that Jaken tried to kill Kagome. It might be smart if Jaken stays in his faint as long as possible. Poor Kagome. I hope that Sesshoumaru doesn't punish her for leaving, shouldn't the pain she felt from the collar's shock be punishment enough? Hope your Christmas was wonderful and that your New Year is incredible! Please post more of this fun story soon!
What do you mean "not one of my funniest?" This was hilarious... and gave me a MUCH needed laugh today, that's for sure!! I've meant to review before, but just haven't had a chance. I LOVE this story!!! I love the wit, imagination, and the oh-so-droll way you have of putting them all in such side-splitting situations! I can hardly wait for the next chuckle-inducing installment. Thanks so much for making my day so much brighter!! :D ~~Wiccan~~
OMFG!!! hahahahahaha "“Yes!” Inuyasha shouted as he jumped to his feet and punched a fist into the air, “Miroku, I think he just beat both of our records for distance! Hey, Kagome, you got any popcorn in that bag?”" hhahahahahaha *just laughs* more please :3
Hey! I beg to differ. I thought it was very funny especially Inuyasha.
Pollyanna (Chapter 5) - Mon 28 Dec 2009
Well, the last part was funny! XD
Lexie (Chapter 5) - Mon 28 Dec 2009
lol! go spelled necklace! go! go! go spelled necklace! *victory dance* ^_^ i never liked kouga.
please update!!
this is a funny story. I like it a lot.
I would be a little upset if I were in her place.
he really should have removed the beads.
autumngold (Chapter 4) - Fri 20 Nov 2009
I'm glad that Kagome was able to go home. At least she was able to have a nice bath and rest. Now she just needs to find a way to not let Sesshoumaru walk all over her. More importantly, she needs to keep Jaken from killing her. I wonder if she will beat him when she gets back? Can't wait for more! I'm so happy that you are continuing this story!
katlady (Chapter 4) - Fri 20 Nov 2009
bravo....goood update as always
Kanna37 (Chapter 4) - Fri 20 Nov 2009
OMG! YAY! I found this story recently over on FF.net, and favorited it, hoping it would be continued, and I am sooo glad to see another chapter. I can't wait to see the whole Kouga part of things... this is hilarious!
Amber
i love this!
Guardian1moon (Chapter 3) - Sat 17 Oct 2009
Lol! Poor Gay Jaken!! Cant wait to see what else happens and what Sesshomaru will say when he comes back but Jaken is so heartbroken he didnt think that Sesshomaru could smell the lies on him! Update please!!
awesome chapter :) i really like how you've written it and i await the next chapter :)
Jaken is going to find himself Sesshomaru-less. Kagome is probably thinking wtf at the moment... I know I would be.
Love how it is developing.
Keep up the good work.
Good luck.
LMAO!!!
Great ending to a good chapter!
*whips tears from my eyes* Kagome must have looked like a fish after that one!
good luck
keep yup the good work
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