awkward but funny, i like that
Fairy tale demons are very rarely as hot as Sesshomaru, and Kagome getting off on his tongue was hot as well. This was weird but a great read.
*giggles* WOW that was out there!!
| Wow! That was amazing! I really liked the part when she almost got swallowed.
Damien Anderson (Chapter 1) - Tue 22 Sep 2009
| nicely written. i enjoyed reading this.
naqaashi (Chapter 1) - Mon 10 Aug 2009
| OOOOOOOHHHHHH....I'll get Brunnar to take a few tips. Nope...he'll swallow, parrot, practise ALL the tips. Maybe then, you won't be quite so...difficult?
| That was so cute!!!!
| Wow, Smittee, haha. I already told you what I thought earlier in chat, but wow. I think I'm totally speechless. This is the first time I've read a story like this and I'm still not quite sure what to think. Interesting is definitely a word that comes to mind!
wow (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Jul 2009
| This is ridiculous.
Kirche (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Jul 2009
| That was an awesome story! I was almost sad when he decided not to eat her though, even if she slid down his throat. Great use of the saliva glands.
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