I believe the word you are looking for is "dying" not "dyeing". It's kind of odd to say "Kikyo is dyeing". It makes me think uhh what is she dyeing? Her clothes? Her hair? what? I understand what you were trying to say but it still remains the wrong word, oddly enough I see it alot in many stories, among many other common word mix-ups..
Another thing, after Kagome falls on Sesshoumaru, he says he is "find" instead of "fine".
Other than those small errors, the story was entirely wonderful, the plot is quite interesting.
--Kaminoko (c)2011
pinkslytherin (Chapter 4) - Thu 05 Nov 2009
YAY! he went to get her from her time!! will he meet her family?
pinkslytherin (Chapter 3) - Thu 05 Nov 2009
thanks for the chapter!!
Wow! I like this please update soon! I wonder how he got to her classroom though?
Confused at Times (Chapter 4) - Wed 28 Oct 2009
Poor Kagome she must be out of the loop. She didn't even know the swine flu is a pandemic of a global scale. We've got it here in my town.
MoMo (Chapter 4) - Wed 28 Oct 2009
That was awesome...I am not satisfied. You must update.
bwahahahahahahahah! ahahahahahahahahahahahahah! wahahahahahahahahahahaha! omg she started on her test then slam! hahahaha oh no! sesshy found her. how the heck he get through. hahahahahahahahahaha yea she's screwed. and omg wat was the teacher gonna do to a guy with swords. hahahahahaha awesome awesome! please update soon cuz this was just to funny.
Dani (Chapter 4) - Tue 27 Oct 2009
Too funny! How is she going to explain that one? Great!
Dani (Chapter 2) - Tue 27 Oct 2009
That all should be are-just thought I'd let you know
Dani (Chapter 2) - Tue 27 Oct 2009
"I do not just kill all the time" - all we sure about that? Great story line!
stars (Chapter 4) - Tue 27 Oct 2009
please updata
Kitty (Chapter 4) - Tue 27 Oct 2009
Update sooner, PLEASE. I want to read more.
autumngold (Chapter 4) - Tue 27 Oct 2009
Isn't that just the way that life works! Sesshoumaru, of course, wouldn't come and steal her away from a test that she didn't know the answers to. No, he has to take her away from one she might have gotten a good grade on. So not fair! Thank goodness Sesshoumaru didn't kill anyone. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update again soon!
Blaire (Chapter 4) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
This is so good!! Please try and update it soon! I love where this story is going! Especially how he's seeming to get agitated that she isn't putting any attention into trying to win his affections. Hahah. 0.o Wonder what her class is gunaa think about that window jump...not to mention the elephant in the room that is sesshoumaru...
Kanna37 (Chapter 4) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
FINALLY! Someone who writes Sesshoumaru making a scene in her time, not giving a damn what anyone thinks! YES!!! There is a god! LOVED IT! Can't wait to read the rest...
Amber
Izzy (Chapter 4) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
LMAO!
How did sesshoumaru get into kagomes time?
wait dont tell me.. it'll spoil future chapters >.<
cantwait to see what happens next..
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