(inulove)If u have anything Negative to stay then don't say anything at all. I really like this story. I do have a ENGLISH problem but u will be able to see that in my first story. (my only story)( Skippy) please don't stop because of one person. If U do that every time then u will not go far in life. (speaking from my own life) will u please give us readers one more chance.

When someone attacks, either attack them back, or ignore them as beneath you. Then keep doing your own thing! Seriously, you should read the reviews for my story on Media Miner. One really mean person, in particular, wrote a bunch of nasty and very demeaning reviews. I couldn't decide if I should ignore them or respond to some of their comments, but I DID decide to keep writing, no matter what! I wish you would decide not to give up. Just think about all the fanfics that are abandoned after just one or two chapters. You have already made it much further than most authors who set out to write a fanfic. So what if your grammar is not perfect. I read a lot, and there are problems with the grammar in all but a few fanfics. I consider good spelling and grammar a "work in progress". Maybe you could take a minute to look over your work before you post it. My old high school English teacher gave his students a good tip, telling us to read the things we write out loud. If something sounds odd, it probably needs re-working. But if you post it, and it is not perfect, so what? The more you write, the better you write. Your detractor is probably just a weak, inadequate little bully. Most likely she has never written anything herself, just gets her jollies trying to intimidate others. Probably a wimp that gets picked on in real life, so she's got to try to intimidate others anonymously on the internet. Here's an idea: why don't you create a character who is a cowardly little bully, or write Kikyo's character to correspond to that personality type. In your story, you can show just how pathetic people like that really are. That would be awesome, wouldn't it?

The ONLY reason I have read this fic thru to ch.10, is because I like the storyline. Otherwise, I would have stopped reading it after ch. 1. It's very hard to read due to the poor English, spelling, and grammar. Sentences are often too long, making me wonder why you bother with starting a new one at all. It literally gets to the point where nothing makes sense. You really need a BETA who understands proper English, punctuation, and grammar. Like I said, however, I do like the storyline.

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Your story has a good plot, I like it. But, I think you could do without so many exclamation points and caps lock. Also, when two people are talking, don't put their conversation in the same paragraph. It gets kind of confusing. Also, don't break a conversation up. If the same person is saying something, keep it in the same paragraph, until another person enters. I'm not trying to sound like a jerk, it's just something I've noticed. Goooooddd plot though. Just make sure to keep the characters in check. ;D

I just found your story and am really enjoying it so far...you really are twisting and turning the plot :) ....the one main glitch that I read so far are your word usages, ie: you use 'waist' (the middle section of the body above the hips) when the context you use the word in it should be 'waste', the same goes for 'weather'(sunny, cloudy, rainy, etc.), you should be using 'whether' instead. These are small instnces, but cause a 'hiccup' when reading the story. Please I mean no offense by this review. :)

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Awesome ;)I´m looking forward to another chapter ^^

It isn't right for kikyo to have to hid what happened to her and the others.But it even more for that woman to make kikyo lie to the one she loves. she doesn't have the right to be angry. I really like this story and I am glad to see another update.

I really like your fic! * Gives bag of pixi sticks* Even the part with touga, normally I don't like his paring changing, but I don't mind it in this. >,< Keep writing!

hey that was a great story so wat going to happen next

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Ah, update soon! :D