knifethrower needs to shut up. this is the author of the story and i feel like the author should put it anyway he/she wants it. knifethrower dont tell how you want the story to go. let the author write it the way he/she wants it. AND I THINK THIS STORY SHOULD BE CONTINUED. FUCK THE PERSON THAT SAID SOMETHING BAD ON IT. THEY AIN'T SHIT ANYWAYS SO DONT LITSEN TO THAT PERSON. this story is good please continue. or at least continue it on another website. IGNORE FLAMERS THEY ARE JUST JERKS AND ASSHOLES OUT THERE THAT SHOOT DOWN GOOD STORIES CUASE THEY CAN'T WRITE WORTH OF SHIT! so i think you should continue and ignore the ignorant flamer! GOOD JOB ON THIS STORY PLEASE CONTINUE! flamers beware you will meet your demise to SESSHOUMARU! lol

I really like this story. its funny and i can't wait to read more.

Hello there. I got in on the tale end of this and read through your reviews. I'm glad you hung in there because life is going to throw all kinds of shit at you and it's best you develop a thick skin so most of it won't penetrate. This old girl speaks from experience. As for your story, I love it! I like that he's being driven crazy by two unmanageable women. I think of them as one being a rock and the other a hard place with him smack dab in the middle. hahaha. Don't you dare stop with this story until the epilogue is finished.

It would be a shame for you not to finish such a lovely story line. A true piece of work is not based on just your grammer, but how you can catch the imaginations of the reader and make them feel like they are living it. This you have done. Something well written does not a good story make. Try not to let a negative comment hurt, but turn it into a challenge for yourself. I, as meany others do, look forward to the trials of Sessho and Kagome falling in love. I wish you the best.

well I can say I was enjoying your story very much in fact I liked how you gave Sesh two women that could get under his skin and he couldn't do anything about it and how you brought in his father always loved Inu Papa in stories I'm sorry you got a reviewer with an attitude I for one think it was a great first fanfic.

please please don't stop this story, just like everyone else has said, don't let them bug you. i understand that you are sensitive but you have to realize that there are people who either a. don't realze they hurt your feelings, or b. don't care or c. it was they're intention (they are flamers for a reason) but i saw nothing wrong with this story it has great spelling and grammer and awesome plot.

Im so sorry that someone negative thoughts have caused you freedom to write something from the heart or new or a new passionate. but this is what i say people like that who think they are better and only a "type" of good people should write work SHOULD SUCK IT AND LONG AND HARD everyone has the right to be his or her own self and share it with the world and if they dont like they dont have to read it or they know where to shove it. Look i really liked your story i bit long wind but good a little new take on things it was good i couldnt wait to get to the good stuff you kept me reading thank you very much for all your work and please dont stop writing just because cause someone couldnt give you good help nice way of putting things types of hits dont let it stop you from doing something good very one has to start somewhere XOXO Lady M PS Dont like people walk over you show them whos boss :)

nooooo you cant stop i was loving it. i just have to know what happens next. :(

don't let one monkey stop the show. continue your story and look past that person. its always going to be a person hating on a story. other people ignore it and shrug it off. don't let one idiotic person ruin your mojo for writing. continue and look past that person i guarantee that person won't have good luck if they said soemthing really mean to you. now continue and share your mind with all the inuyasha fans out there. a lot of people like your story. you could even get an award on here if you continue writing good stories like this one. please continue. and if you stop writing then you are giving that person the ups and they are winning so continue on and look past idiocy.

Skippy, Please continue with your story. Just because one of the "readers" does not hold a Doctorate in Creative Literature or in English does not give them a write to put down your story and say do not continue it. You are the author you can choose to write or not, however it would be a shame to see your story go away. You have so much potential as a writer. You have a great story line here. You had my attention for several days with this story in fact. I was very upset when I got to chapter 11 and got your note. If the grammar is difficult just get someone you trust to revise the grammar. You have a lot to say and with a little bit of tweeking you could write a book or two in Fiction. I must say your very innovative dear. Keep up the good work.

Please don't discontinue this story. It's interesting and I've been following it with much enjoyment. Like Knifethrower said, good grammar and spelling comes with time and practice. If you want, send me the chapters as you write them and I'll fix the grammar and spelling for you so that you can see what it should look like. I wouldn't dream of touching the content, because it's just that good! Think about it, ok?