More More! Another chapter please!
Different! I'm interested, very interested. I can't wait to see what happens next and learn more about your version of characters. I was right there with them hiding behind the bar. Excellent beginning, I'm sure more excellance is sure to follow. I have a question, was it all a set up? Did the company that Kagome work for use her to set up Sess, Inu and Miroku? Maybe that was two questions, I'm having a bit of a time figuring it out, so much so I can't wait for more information in the chapters to come. So don't answer the questions I want to wait and figure it out on my own. Your story is fun to read. Hoping for more real soon! Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
Hearing the voices of the Black Lagoon characters coming out of the Inuyasha cast's mouths broke my brain! This is a strange choice for a cross over, but you certainly have the right feel for the Black Lagoon dialog. It's like that Mokomoko + Miko story -- it's so weird, but I couldn't stop reading.
addiesmoon (Chapter 1) - Tue 07 Jul 2009
holy hell that wsa kick a** i can't wait for the next chapter
Wow!!! I have to say your first chapter was way beyond being different from anything I've read in the Inuyasha fan fic world. It seems you went all out to grab your audience and with me you sure succeeded. Now you have me on the edge of my chair eager for the next update.
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