Ugh!!! evil cliffie!! Good chapter, as always. I ca,'t wait to read more!! ^_^ Dewa mata
monrque (Chapter 16) - Sun 15 Jun 2008
for once could you not make her
a clumsy girl in need of someone
to save her.
i love this story every time i am
on the site i look for it.
i dare myself to read and tell myself
that i won't because of the angst.
one would say i am torn LOL keep up the good work
Awww.... Can I have the same teacher? -blush-
I think he's good for a surprise... No one molds Kagome as they please, if her temper has anything to say in the matter ^_^
Very good chapter, as always. You made my day, thank you. :)
Dewa mata
(Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Jun 2008
This is delicious! Keep going!
That was beautifully well written! I enjoyed reading the interactions between between both Kagome and Sesshoumaru.
Well everything about this story is enjoyable! I loved how you created Sesshoumaru's past and how his mother/father are the reasons how he became the person he is today. I can tell that a lot of this was well thought out... just a few minor details that were a bit off, but other than that this is a fantasic read!
Good luck
Keep up the great work!
Soooo hot! ^_^ Now THAT'S encouragement! Keep up the fantastic work!
This story is amaaaaziinnngg...:)
M.L.Death.
Ah, poor Sango. That must have been a shock lol. Anyway, if she was close enough to see them, let alone to hear them... Then I find hard to believe Sesshoumaru didn't know she had been there. Or was she upwind? Was he too... distracted? lol.
As always, very good job. I like your story very much. ^_^
Dewa mata
L-desu (Chapter 13) - Thu 05 Jun 2008
woohoo!! sango's a voyeaur! miroku would be so proud.... lol but i like how u complimented her character by her turning away so abruptly the second they started kissing. it's so... ionno, Sango-ish? i'm suprised u didnt make her turn beet red. can't wait for the next one!
blair (Chapter 11) - Tue 03 Jun 2008
ahhhhhh i cant wait :)
:O That made me all weepy-faced. I love how you made Rin yell back! I mean WOW I have never seen that in a fanfic before unless its AU and Rin is an adult. Neat-o! This is one of my favs for sure, LL.
Lizzie (Chapter 12) - Tue 03 Jun 2008
*sobs, wipes eyes* Beautiful!!
Awwwwwwww!!
after this very intelligent review, I will leave you to your writing... ahem... dewa mata
Kagome357 (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Jun 2008
Thanks for bringing this story over here...I"m so glad you're continuing it. This is one of those stories I was feening for...
You got my eyes slightly moistered there. This story is really good and captivating, the emotions are reaching me like I was actually whitnessing the interactions. Keep on the good work, I look forward to more!!! (poor Rin... And poor Sess. I hope he'll find peace.)
Awesome awesome awesome...AWESOME! I can't wait til your next chapter, you're keeping me at the edge of my seat!
Kagome is between the proverbial rock and a hard place. Cannot wait for more.
Lizzie (Chapter 9) - Fri 30 May 2008
Wow. I mean...wow. So now she's stuck between two brothers who don't want her. Will she go home and mope? Will Inuyasha forgiver her and she forgets Sesshomaru? Will he forgive her and she DOESN'T forget Sesshomaru? Does Sess forgive her after she explains?! Does she explain?! And how on earth do they get the holes in Swiss cheese?! Will my questions ever be answered?!? (Hopefull the first few will, when you post the next chapter, hint-hint...) I think I'll go cry now...
Wow that really made me feel sad, but it was very well written and it drew out the emotions well. Keep it going, I really want to know what Sesshoumaru was thinking and what Inuyasha was thinking while Kagome was away.
chevonne (Chapter 9) - Thu 29 May 2008
i thought this was funny but all i have read so far in angst. this is a good story and do look forward to reading more
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