Nice story 

I'm sorry but you've lost me. Overall the fic was going so well too and after trying pages and pages of terribly written fics to then get excited finding this well written one and then after 22 chapters not being able to finish it is disappointing. Though that's not your problem I suppose. 

This was rape. She said no. She was very distressed. She begged him to stop. He did it anyway. And you have made it seem like a hot, romantic sex scene but it isn't. It's literally rape. And it's very disappointing to me honestly. I had warning signs you might do this, but because this was well written and I was genuinely interested in your story I kept going. So I guess that's on me. 

I've made the choice to inform you instead of just backing out because i firmly believe romanticizing rape is harmful. Not only is this triggering for many people, but it also normalizes bad behavior. Since I've decided to say that instead of just leaving I'll go ahead and say also that Sesshomaru had no right to suggest keeping their courting a secret and then drop the info without her consent when he felt convenient, nor did he have a right to keep her from battle. I really dont feel like kagome has any backbone in this story anymore. I kept reading for a chapter to see if she would even address any of this, but clearly she doesn't. 

Anyway, while you're free to write as you please and are a good writer, I and others would appreciate a dubcon warning. Even though it was noncon, dubcon would at least give a heads up about how you seem to have intended it to be taken. 

I enjoyed the story but since we got that steamy scene by the river when sessy has kagome finally admit she belongs to him, I'd have to say I'm kinda disappointed how I didn't get much details about the mating and the ending was a little  abrupt & slightly disappointing. Overall good writing and I enjoyed it still. 7/10

Great characterization and back story! Even though it hurts my heart ;_;

Ugh. I mean, I get it. Sessh is Dominant Inu, Mr Possessive... But I hate when he gets rapey and Kagome, despite her lack of consent, realizes that yes she does want it and him. Maybe it's just me but if my fiance did that he'd be in the doghouse (pun not intended) until he sincerely apologized and realized what he did wrong. I've dumped guys for less, and it's honestly pretty awful to have someone do that to you, even if it's only him putting his hand on your crotch when you're at the movies even after you've moved it to your knee multiple times.

I don't mind rapey!Sessh, as weird as it sounds. Him forcing himself on Kagome is not the issue here. Kagome going from NO DON'T PLEASE DON'T to YES just because he diddles her bits a little, and when they haven't had a frank conversation about rape-play or anything... Yeah, that's the issue. Just all sorts of yikes for me.

Sesshoumaru's Princess (MA) by SpeedyTomato has a good scene where Kagome does the whole rape-play thing but she confirms the safeword first. Somewhat Happy Endings by Midori Haru is a consensual non-consent fic - the entire first arc of the story is CNC. 

It's pretty late where I am as I'm writing this, so as much as I want to keep going I gotta stop, but if you'd like to talk more on the subject just send me a message. :)

What a fantastic story! I absolutely loved it :)

That Inuyasha is such a pain in the arse and such a brat. I wish I could pluck him out, put him over my knees and give him a good spanking. He needed one so badly.

Um, LOVE the story, would've loved it MORE with an epilogue, but oh well.

P.S. At the end of the chapter is the chapter AGAIN. Um, how to word this, it's like you pasted the chapter in here, and then pasted it again right under it. I'm assuming that was an accident, and that you weren't aware that you did it.

Lol! Cute! OXD

Um, I know this doesn't really have anything to do with the story, but tomatoes are vegetables, not fruits. At least, that's what they're considered in this part of the world.

Um, the whole problem could have been avoided if they had just brought Kagome back to the fight with them. They made her go to the village because she didn't have her bow and arrows, but she could have gone back with Sango and Miroku, since she had her bow and arrows at that point. So, it just seems like they were treating like one of the kids, instead of one of the fighters, and she is one of the fighters. You even had Sesshomaru declare her the alpha of her group. Alpha's don't hide with the kids.

I started reading this years ago and only rece found it again and complete. I really enjoyed it and was so glad to find it finally finished. Thank you for a great story and for never giving up on it despite long absences.

Ok slightly disappointed since i waited so long for the good stuff. I get what they author was doing, the tone was serious and this was more than just sex. However after the last but if smut I was looking for more than a movie fade to black , cue the drapes, scene. 

Uh no Kagome! You need to do it onlyil if you are truly ready! Otherwise you'll regret it and make hime feel worse about if you do.

Thank you for sharing this with us! It was just absolutely beautiful! I cried at the wedding and thought you built up their relationship in such a lovely manner. My only gripe is that it ended abruptly. Like we had so many beautiful drawn out moments and all of a sudden it was like THE END. I get that you'd been writing this story for a long time and probably wanted to finish it asap, but boy that was a rather lukewarm ending. 

Wonderful story, I had a blast reading it!

So she's been practicing these three years with Kaede and Miroku that Kagome is able to maskher presence entirely. Nice trick. Strofoam smells noxious if burned, and is terrible for your body (it specifically says not to put boilin water in it).  

This story was amazing and I enjoyed it! Thank you!

Drama, on to the next chapter!