Welcome back! I was so glad to see an update that I had to re-read the other chapters first!
Now, what is Sesshomaru up to? It must be really killing Kagome, especially since there has been some distance between them. She must be feeling really insecure. Poor girl, and Sesshomaru is so good at communicating his intent....NOT!
hm i like this story so far! :) i definitely need to read more! :)
hm ppl have done the Rin is sick thing, however, no one has given it a time limit and i feel your story is unique! i can't wait to read more and find out what happens next! :)
Why is Kagome wearing such modern clothing as shorts? She's looked at strangely for her short skirt and even thought to be a whore for such revealing clothes. So why is Sesshoumaru not protesting when she continues to show so much of herself in an era where virtuous women don't reveal so much of themselves? I know that she believes and says her clothes are decent. For her time yes, but not for the past. The tachi has always been a form of protection and barrier, letting her wear whatever she wanted and cushioning disapproval and remarks from outsiders. Also, as his mate and Lady of the West, she will have to dress appropriately.
I hope she eventually grows up in her mind and realizes that she can't keep stalling against Sesshoumaru's desire to mate her. He's not going to 'date' her for years before they 'wed' like some couples from her time. Maybe she needs to talk with Miroku, too, and get the picture from the youkai viewpoint. Miroku is more wise than he lets on. If she plans to be 'married' to a youkai, she needs to make the effort to learn more about their culture like Sesshoumaru is about hers.
moussou (Chapter 14) - Fri 17 Jun 2011
Okay. While I admire your style of writing I just cant stand how Kagome abuses her power over Inuyasha. Sitting him 10 times in a row is plain cruel and probably deadly. She's supposed to be kind, ne?
Lets face it. She's far from alpha. Inuyasha is the leader, kagome keeps the tachi together with her loving personality not her strenght.And to be an alpha one needs battle strenght, be a tactitian and be able to defend the pack. Kagome lacks those.
But as I've said I love your style and perfect grammar. The story is enjoyable too.
Just some things are off IMHO.
Ashes (Chapter 26) - Fri 17 Jun 2011
Thanks for not abandoning the fic. I've really enjoyed it. Good luck with college, hopefully your experience is better than mine was.
Paige (Chapter 26) - Fri 17 Jun 2011
This is the first time I have read this story and so far I really like it.
I cannot wait to see what happens next: Will they marry/mate? Or part ways forever? :P
I'll be waiting for the next chapter update!
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