awwwww!!!! :) THIS IS SUCH A GOOD CUTE STORY THAT MADE ME CRY UR AN AWESUM WRITER AND I HOPE U CONTINUE TO WRITE MORE.....:)
Good Story
| OMG! Kawaii! I love it! This was kawaii! This is the greatest! *starry eyed*
stars (Chapter 15) - Sat 15 Aug 2009
| this was great please do another one soon
| yay! 0.0 wow i can't think of anything else to say except YAYNESS!
sekiaku (Chapter 15) - Sat 15 Aug 2009
| Bravo! Bravo! I loved the ending! It was so sweet and cute! Yay! Congrats on finishing!
Lilith (Chapter 15) - Sat 15 Aug 2009
| Kai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Omg... awwwwwwww!! That was so sweet AND sad!! she disappered through the tree...>.> oh well, she had it easy.. But i wuvs dis story but now it's done... AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!! wait- *thinks for a minute* im ganna go bother you about you other stories >:3
| The rock thing was fine! There's no way Kagome is actually going to win a PHYSICAL FIGHT with Naraku. The only way she could would be by purifying him. She always did have a lot of purifying power, and nobody ever really gave her much credit when she did use it. And if she was going to succeed, it would have to be quick. I can see some big arrogant guy scoffing at a girl with a rock, saying "You're going to kill me with a freakin' rock. Go ahead." Remember David and Goliath. So really, the way you did it is the only way I can really see it happening.
stars (Chapter 14) - Tue 11 Aug 2009
| please updata
pinkslytherin (Chapter 13) - Sat 08 Aug 2009
| i cant wait to see what will happen next!!!
| *epic gasp* Oh no! I hope Sesshy saves her in time. Update soon plz.
Frustrated (Chapter 12) - Sun 02 Aug 2009
| For the love of the gods, it's "since" not 'sense". This is my first time reading this story and I keep seeing you write "sense" instead of "since" when it's applicable. I.e the first sentence of the new chapter. "It had been day’s sense they went and looked for Naraku". It should be "It had been day’s sincethey went and looked for Naraku. "Jaken began to keep quiet sincehe got glares every time.
Sorry I don't mean to come off b*tchy or anything. I just hate when people are not using proper grammar. Your story is good, actually it's very good. I like the plot, but this distraction is too much.
Miss.Undo (Chapter 11) - Wed 29 Jul 2009
| great chapter only one question.. um where will she go when there all done? back to her time or stay in his time? well hope you got another chapterplaned out. update soon!")
faby (Chapter 10) - Tue 28 Jul 2009
| your, het. is better alright.please, I've read other's "mateing" part now those suck. (note: 3 years go I read the some suckie ones)
stars (Chapter 10) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
| please updata
| Wow this story's really good :D
Keep up the good work! ^^ I can't wait for the next upcoming chapters :]
Miss.Undo (Chapter 9) - Fri 24 Jul 2009
| Wonderful work. please update as soon as you can. i hope theres is a lemon next chapter!they need one lol. ")
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