Oh, wow! What a badass priestess! I'm anxious to see how Sessh will pull through, and even more anxious to see what plans they have in store for him and Kagome. BRILLIANT!
Lilith (Chapter 5) - Sun 19 Jul 2009
0.0 wow. i was not expecting that, but it was an amazing chapter!! :D
An incredibly insightful chapter - it really makes you think. What a suspensful story!
i should say the priestess is arrogant, not your work lol. it came out wrong.
what an arrogant piece of work. I love it!
Eru (Chapter 4) - Sat 18 Jul 2009
More please.
Wow! This story has me so hooked onto it! Just like your Seven Feudal Fairy Tales.
I really love how it's going and how she's questioning everything.
Please continue! I want to see if she truly betrayed him or tried to save his life again.
oh i love your characterization of Sesshoumaru here! Yes! Finally somebody who sees him as a beast, not just a man with an inner beast. Just awesome.
NOW, MORE!!
You are a sick, sick woman. Eating raw, liver, ewww!
Ok, still reading
I think he's delusional, wanting to be pierced through his chest. and you'er not holding back on the gore. I love it!
OMG, awesome and intense beginning. I love the atmosphere you've worked into this piece.
kk, reading on.
MOAR PLZ. I really liked this chapter. You've really set up a very creepy story and I'm left just waiting for the next work. This story is really good, and I wants more!
kedala (Chapter 4) - Sun 12 Jul 2009
Another riveting chapter.
Your ability astounds me.
I love the rawness of Sesshomaru in this tale, allowing his true nature to show through without taking away from his aristocratic upbringing.
I certainly look forward to more.
K
I love how this chapter ended!!! When I saw that Kagome was not letting go of her argument, I was wondering what was going to happen next! Thinking about it now, I supposed I should have been able to guess because of the fact that she had kept the needle. Fantastic writing as usual ladybattousai!! I can't wait for the next installment!!
Zyren (Chapter 4) - Sun 12 Jul 2009
What the hell?! Why would she do that?!! ugh he had a point though, she better not come even close to getting him killed...
and Prometheus was the one who was punished for stealing fire from the gods by being strapped to a rock and having his liver devoured by an eagle every day for eternity, correct? how fitting then that Sessh would eat her liver...does he always do that? What does he gain from that that he doesnt gain from say the heart?
What a chapter!!! This served as a very vivid reminder that Sesshoumaru is NOT human! I like to be reminded of that sometimes as some people portray him in a way that is a bit more docile. Very interesting stuff. I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Yaaaaaaay!!!! I'm soooo excited to read another of your fabulous stories. I have to say I'm enjoying the darkness of the plot so far.
Lilith (Chapter 3) - Mon 06 Jul 2009
O_O Wow. i wouldn't have seen that coming... But was it great!!! ^_^
I can't wait until the next chapter! :P
don't get me wrong, I love the story (even the gruesome parts) but I think my stomach can only take so much today. it seems everywhere I turn I see (or read) the detailed accounts of insides becoming outsides. The last part reminded me of the second episode of true blood (season two) and you did a very good writing on the insides.... stuff.
But I love the story, I just reached my gross-out factor for today.. so ew.
Continue on and ignore this ramble! ^^
~zen
kedala (Chapter 3) - Sun 05 Jul 2009
This story had me on the edge of my seat the entire time...and it's only the 3rd chapter!
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