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stars (Chapter 7) - Sun 09 Aug 2009
please updata

FoxyLadyKnight (Chapter 7) - Sat 01 Aug 2009
NO! NO! NO! Awwww, man. I have to wait for the next installment. Please, please hurry. Love It! I really enjoyed reading this story. Sesshoumaru speechless? Who would have thought it could ever happen. LOL. Have to read more. Continue, continue!

MLMonty (Chapter 7) - Sat 01 Aug 2009
Very nice! I liked hearing Sesshoumaru's thoughts and feelings on what happened. I'm also curious on what you have planned for him to find a mate. A matchmaker?....that would point him back at Kagome after hearing his demands on what he wants in a mate! LOL

loveless (Chapter 7) - Wed 29 Jul 2009
Love the update. I wonder what will happen between Sesshomaru and Kagome now. Please update soon. The suspence is killing me.

electrika (Chapter 7) - Wed 29 Jul 2009
You have a good plot line but your grammar needs a lot of work. Also you tend to use words without knowing their complete meaning. For example "It was one of the reason, beside the fact that he can’t stand the thought of been constraint to do anything," here the correct grammatical wording would be " thought of being constrained" In another chapter, I think you meant leash not leach. If you could proof read your chapters and correct these errors, you would have a really great story.

knifethrower (Chapter 7) - Wed 29 Jul 2009
I can't wait to find out how Sesshomaru goes about finding a suitable mate. I already know it will be awesome!

KeepingitReal (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 Jul 2009
It's report not rapport. Two very different things. And you keep making that same error over and over again.

~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 6) - Mon 20 Jul 2009
hehehe very nice... update soon n.n

~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 5) - Mon 20 Jul 2009
This chapter was nicer than the one before. n_n Not because you're a bad writer! All the contrary... You just were using a lot of 'telling' instead of 'showing'.. thus making the content a little boring. But this chapter!...THIS CHAPTER was much better! However, I spotted some tense shift and bad spelling... I didn't expect that n_n' ...Anyway, I very much like your ff :D I can imagine everything very clearly! ^^ That's awesome!

loveless (Chapter 6) - Mon 20 Jul 2009
Great update. I wonder what will happen now between Sesshomaru and Kagome. Will they have to keep up this lie and pretend to like each other? This is exciting! Please update soon.

Fluffy (Chapter 6) - Mon 20 Jul 2009
If you need a beta for your story, I could do it for you! I have a ton of experience! I am good with grammar and spelling, and I am really easy to get along with. I could bet that we would be friends by the end of this story!! Hahaha. Just PM me if you'd like me to beta for you! Love, Fluffy P.s. I love the story! Keep it up!

GreyEcho (Chapter 6) - Sun 19 Jul 2009
ha hah! Very nice.

stars (Chapter 6) - Sun 19 Jul 2009
please updata soon

taixi (Chapter 6) - Sun 19 Jul 2009
how is it possible that neither Sess nor Kag seem to realize there will be repercussions from the confrontation? They both act like they can now go about their lives without ever having to acknowledge that Kag is supposedly engaged to be mated to Sess...as if the others wouldn't hold them to this statement! I look forward to finding out how you disabuse them of this naivety.

Bree (Chapter 6) - Sun 19 Jul 2009
I can't find the words to say how much I like this story. It's really starting to take shape. I only wish your chapters were longer so I could read even more. Will Sesshomaru seek out Kagome next? keep up the good work and please, please update soon.

GreyEcho (Chapter 5) - Sun 19 Jul 2009
Yay! This went from good to awesome! I can't wait to see what happens.

stars (Chapter 5) - Mon 13 Jul 2009
please updata and try to make it longer

shy (Chapter 5) - Mon 13 Jul 2009
I LOVE IT , I LOVR IT, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE!!!!!!!!!

MLMonty (Chapter 5) - Mon 13 Jul 2009
I like the story it's entertaining but it needs to be cleaned up a bit. There are more grammar errors than acceptable but at least it's READABLE. You also have some word confusion such as when you put rapport instead of report. Over all not but but it could be better if you cleaned it up.

pauly (Chapter 5) - Sat 11 Jul 2009

OMG!!!! I didn't see that one coming. GREAT!!!! Work. Keep it up. ;)


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