I really liked Sesshomaru's character in the first few chapters, but he's gone waaaaay OOC. I don't even know what to say. I just thought I'd let you know that if you were trying to keep him IC that you may need to retool his actions.
Well, i absolutely adored this fic. right down to the end. I think it was very creative from the start and as with all awsome fics,i'm sad to see it end. however, i extend my congratulations on the successful completion of your story. Many people (like myself, lol) tend to get lost in the middle and never finish, but yo made it through, so again congrats,a nd i do hope to read more from you. You've proven to be a talented author and i think i'll enjoy reading more of your work so until next time...
Keep on writing and i'll keep on reading
MUA (Most Unlikely Angel) 0:)
mary (Chapter 37) - Tue 02 Feb 2010
can't believe it's finished. great ending.
joyouki (Chapter 36) - Tue 02 Feb 2010
NO NO NO>>>I hope you are lieing some more because I can't possibly imagine this story being done in one more chapter. There is so much to tell about the baby and everything. She's not really showing yet, how can this be done? :(
I did enjoy Inuyasha's jail break! lol
joyouki (Chapter 35) - Tue 02 Feb 2010
Gasp! That Kinji is a slim ball. Omg, I felt so badly for Kouga and it was heart wrenching reading about Kagome trying to comfort him.
I just can't believe Sess got captured and everyone else didn't? Will that make him feel weak?
I hope Sess and Kagome can read each others thoughts or feelings throught their mating mark, and he will know what is planned and go along with it. It is going to be terrible to read any chapters on Kagome telling him she doesn't love him, but if he can sense a lie, maybe he'll get the hint.
Anyway....I got to read the next chapter! Thanks bunches
Kiri (Chapter 37) - Mon 01 Feb 2010
I very much enjoyed this tale you created and thank you for adding this last chapter - I love being able to finish reading a story!!! Your next one sounds really good too! I will most definately have to read that one! THANK YOU !!
Hon, I am so loving this story. The plot is certainly unique. And I love the flashes of humor. Fine work, Inu Demoness Kitana
I'm glad Kaito revealed Kenji's plan to sesshoumaru! Hopefully now the nightmare will be over for our favourite duo. thanks for sharing!
OMG ARE YOU SERIOUS?!
Gahh, Cliffhangers. I. Can't. Wait. For. The. Next. Chapter.
Update as soon as you can ^^
omg omg omg...they captured them how did they do that...its scary at what he proposing...he could kill them both at the same time with their bond between them...i hope they dont give up on each other...
good job and update soon...
thanks for the shout out!
Gah, such an evil bastard!~ >_> I hope Kenji gets slaughtered.
Please keep up the great story!~ I can't wait to read the next chapter!
REDWOLF (Chapter 35) - Sat 23 Jan 2010
Great chapter! If Sesshoumaru can get his act together , maybe there is hope!
loveyaa (Chapter 35) - Sat 23 Jan 2010
I must say that I quite enjoy the fight to be together. I hope that they will be able to fight through this. You have done quite a splendid job of setting up this struggle and I can't wait for the resolution of it. til next time!!
Yay more chapters! I have to say though i'd quite happily gut Kenji for what he's making kagome do, it's quite possibly going to be worse than death for sesshoumaru if she acts like she doesn't love him anymore. thanks for updating
loveyaa (Chapter 34) - Tue 19 Jan 2010
I am acutally hoping that Sesshoumaru and the gang don't come to quickly and kill everybody off. I love the struggle but of course I want a happy ending. til next time... may it still be dark and dangerous :)
joyouki (Chapter 34) - Tue 19 Jan 2010
KINJI that scum bag...well when Sess gets a hold of him, that says it all! Another great chapter. I am so glad Inuyasha was able to be revived. It did make me laugh when Kuga got interupted. I can see him in all his glory jumping up for Kags! loved it
good chapter, Im afraid to see what happens next...it is scary that he is so devious...
good job and update soon...
I would really like to kill Kenji now, please?
Well I think everything should work out in the end... (I just hope Sesshomaru kills that idiot). I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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