I'm very sorry to say this but i will not be finishing this story. All the characters are completely OC. kagome is spineless, indecisive and totally lacks in maturity. Sesshoumaru is so submissive, he just passively watches the woman who said she only wanted to be with him, kiss other men and says nothing about it. His lack of anger, or any other type of negative feeling, is unrealistic. Some narrative parts are unnecessary and just seem to be there to take up space, i would suggest maybe trying to wait some time, then reread the chapter you want to write before uploading it, this way it should be more obvious which parts are superfluous.

once again you have written a story that i like. sessho was a little ooc, but i liked him that way. he showed emotions around the ones close to him and he even made and had friends he could be comfortable with. kags was a little bit 'weak' in this storry, but she had her strong momments too.i'm glad you made Rin their daughter. i was wondering how she would be included in this story.  i am a fan of your writing and i hope you never stop. keep up the great writing. c'ya'

Query: Why are you writing Fanfiction? This should be a stand alone novel:)

forgive me if I'm wrong, but isn't Kiede's name actually spelled Kaede? 

Disappointed about the final moments abd time in kenji castle. But the kid, simply wonderful.

AMAZING! Firsy you left that cliffy then boom u shocked me. Yep you are an amazing writer. I know i wrote a ton before but its how i was taught to review writers. I only leave this many comments when a story is excellent. It had its ups and downs but like i said before i would have stopped reading if it was a bad story. Again, i love this. I know writers take their time posting new chapters in order to get more feedback, but when a story is complete its usually less comments. Most people don't review until the last chapter or sometimes they dont comment at all. There is nothing to motivate them since the story is complete. But i think when a story is this great it deserves tons of reviews :)

There is also that ranting thing you make Kagome do. I feel that its just there to cause you want to express and talk about the things you are into. But that has nothing to with the story. The band ranting, the books, thats something for your profile page. These are all unecessary as i have learnt in the past. Omg i cant help it i had to get it off my chest. HOWEVER i obviously love the story or i wouldnt still be reading

Ok them being in the mordern world got a bit corny, cheesy. She just suddenly got him mordern clothes and now theres a club? Uhmmm yea right. Its suddenly feels like this story took a turn to childish teen land with the adorable sleeping and waking up. I feel like im suddenly  in a sushine world some young chick wrote.  On top of that the mating seems to always get pushed back. I really love this story dispite the annoying way sesshomaru is portrayed, but i am almost reaching my limit and i really hate quiting a story i started reading.

Amazing i really love this story so far. I love sessh in this tale. I like the mystery of this vision kagome had. Cant wait to read this chp and the rest of this story.

I love this story, I read it yes ago so I'm finally leaving a review. This story is amazing, awesome and I enjoyed it.

i was sooo sad when he had her and when she had to act like she didnt love sesshoumaru!! but this story was adorable and romantic!! i'm glad she got her dad back :)

i feel that shess is a little to mushy and giddy. he's more serious and maybe  humorous and soft around kagome but he's losing his characteristics 

to much. even around kouga and inuyasha.

I loved this story. I have read it twice now, and each time it has gotten better and better. Thanks for a great story.

nice fic i abosolutely love this one btw nice name for a girl im quite familar with it its mine as well:)

Interesting start. can't wait to read the rest. 

Oh my lord. You just kept me from a night of sleep with this AMAZING story of yours. I mean honestly, its' spectacular :). You've got a wonderful imagination and you keep things real. I'm truly sorry for the loss in your family during the course of this story, you truly have more strength than I do by continuing. Once again, your story was amazing and truly worthy of staying up for :)

I love this story. It was AWESOME! But I have a question, If Kagome turned into a youkai, Then why did her and Sesshoumaru have a hanyou baby? Would it not be a full blood since she concevied after she changed? Other then that great story.

I can't wait to read the next chapter. Tis is my favorite InuYashsa couple...

I'm new so I don't know what to do most of the time but I hope you can read my fist to-be-published fanfiction as soon as I upload it!

Tanx!!!

-Nightmare Dreamcast

Um...I don't think they would have said homicides back then. Maybe deaths or even murders. Even killings but not homicides.