This is a touching chapter. Inuyasha would be devastated when he finds out Kagome is mated to Sesshomaru and is the mother of his heir after he's revived (IF he's revived. he has to wake up some time). And then what? I have a feeling that Kagome will want to stay with Sesshomaru, now that Kazukimaru is in the picture. She just has to break it to him gently. Then maybe, he'll find someone else, unless the elders throw someone in his face, especially Mizuki. I wonder what they're scheming since they want to make sure Kagome stays with Sesshomaru. His father would be upset if the elders tried to kill Inuyasha. Who knows what'll happen, except you? Those elders are definitely up to something. I can feel it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Miwa, I forgive you for not updating for a while. I love how you have written this chapter and wish to congratulte you on your award. To me though, your fic is more of a different telling of romance than a dark fic and I truly, truly love it. Thank you for continuing such a touching story and hope you will give us more. I can see her letting go of Yasha and giving in to Sess becuse he gives her what she needs, not what she wants, which is why her and Yasha don't work. Kazuki was a great name to give the pup, definitely fits into the story. Thank you Miwa!
Vicky (Chapter 28) - Wed 03 Mar 2010
I'm soooo happy you updated. I just had to read it right away when I saw you updated this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon.
This has been one touching chappie. I'm happy that Kagome was able to give birth without any complications. However, I wonder what will happen when Kagome decides to leave. Do the Inu elders see Kagome as only a tool to give birth to the next generation of the Western Land's heirs? And what happens to the deal Sesshou made with Kagome? Will he keep his end of the deal? What will Inuyasha, Sango, Miroku, Shippou and Kaede think of all of this? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
Please update again soon... what happens now? Is inuyasha saved? Does Kagome leave Sesshomaru? More please more!
is it over???
Jessica (Chapter 27) - Thu 04 Feb 2010
omg! i love it! i just read all 27 chappies in pne go!
Sokai (Chapter 27) - Sat 30 Jan 2010
I do hope that Sessy doesn't get into to much trouble. I wonder if he will bring inuyasha back now?
Awsome!!!! Baby Boy is now here! Now for a kickbutt name and another glorious arc about him! Update soon!!!
<3 love the new chapter!!! :D Keep up the amazing work!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! :D
Amy (Chapter 27) - Mon 25 Jan 2010
Howdy,
Thank you for the update. I was supposed to be reading for Asian Politics and Contemporary China classes but couldn't resist. As I was reading and since my brain was still in study mode I picked up on a few things.
1. They were in the birthing chamber {{change with to where}} the maids and midwives moved around them to prepare for the Western heir’s delivery.
2. He stared at her to see her panicked-stricken face.{{odd sentence sort of over states the obvious. If it was "He stared at her feelling :blank: emotion from seeing her panicked-stricken face." it would make more sence.}} I really like how you reasoned why male youkai are don't enter the inner chamber, very inciteful.
At one point the song "Tradition!" from Fiddler on the Roof popped into my head...youtube the song and you'll get it if you have no clue what I'm saying.
3. I'm confused on the newborn how is it able to crawl? Is he in his true form and puppy like?
And what a wonderful prayer (that's my interp on it and phrase for it) seshhomaru said there at the end. Send it to Halmark and make millions.
i love it. i hope you update soon. and good luck with getting your work done
Great chapter! I really liked the fact that he broke the tradition for her (is this love? XD)
Please keep up the great work! :3
Sala (Chapter 27) - Mon 25 Jan 2010
I doubt he'll get in too much trouble for it. After all, he IS the lord -- he can make or break his own traditions. ^_~
Lilith (Chapter 27) - Mon 25 Jan 2010
hello there ^^
i just have to say, "AWWWWWWW!" Sesshou-chan is a papa. How cute is that? :3
haha, i just had the urge to review... *looks at last review i wrote*yup... that was a LONG time ago. XD
But, wonderful chapter. I loved it, and i cannot wait until the next update ^^
~Riku
REDWOLF (Chapter 27) - Mon 25 Jan 2010
I hope Sesshoumaru tells them to shove-it with their tradition. I think it is wonderful that he was there! Great chapter, fantastic story!
This is why I love the great Miwa.
This update was just...amazing! I can feel the love between the two of them; it's growing to be so strong and so unbreakable :) LOL I believe Sesshoumaru would not get into too much trouble, would he? I mean, it is not as if he harmed anyone, and he was only trying to protect his loved ones. That justifies quite a bit in my opinion. Good job Miwa dear, and OMG I just lurrrrve the idea of a mini Sesshy <3
Miss.Undo (Chapter 27) - Mon 25 Jan 2010
oh my kami i love it! its so cute! he will probably get in trouble but oh well! ") pleas update soon!
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