Now thats better, i like the 'rewind' concept! Enjoyed this chapter greatly, it shows Sesshomaru really wants Kagome at his side, and isn't doing this just for an heir, or to piss off Inuyasha when he wakes!

Keep up the good work!!

I love the idea of this story, the only thing that I did not enjoy was that there was only three chapters, update when you get a chance please?????

Bravo! Bravo! I love this story so much and it keeps getting better. I really hope she can come to learn to love sesh...i would in a heartbeat! :) I'm so excited to find out the reasons of why she isn't pupped yet (from chapter 2) Hope we start to find that out soon. Looking forward to another grand chapter -Ladydot

I'm kinda glad you jumped a couple of years, but then at the same time you missed out on all the really good stuff in between!

However i did enjoy this chapter and do look forward to the next, as i want to see what Sesshomaru does!

Thanks for the update!!

still a good story.  i am fineing myself waiting for the next chapter.  keep up the great story line

You use a mixture of tenses while writing.  If English is not your first language, I would suggest asking a native English speaker to beta your fan fiction before posting it.

I love it! Its now going on my favorites list ^-^ I hope you update soon!!

The premise of the story sounds interesting.  I can't wait to read the next chapter.  I think you write well considering English is not your first or second language.  Please update soon.

The premise of the story sounds interesting.  I can't wait to read the next chapter.  I think you write well considering English is not your first or second language.  Please update soon.

I really enjoy this story so much! Its a brilliant plot and i really can't wait to see what happens next. You are doing an amazing job writing this in english when its not even your second language! I hardly saw any mistakes. Keep up the wonderful work and I'll be watching for the next chapter :)

Please continue!

I enjoyed the story so far, it has quite an interesting spin on it. You have gotten my attention and I look forward to the next time/part :)

very good . some spelling errors,but who am i to talk about that .  The story is very good and has me waiting and wanting more so please update soon and often.

I like this!!! This is deffinately different than anything i have read before!!!

OMG! Yes you most definitely should continue with this! No way can you stop it there, it just got good!!

Kagome has accepted Sesshomaru's offer without knowing what he truly wanted, and i really want to see how this plays out, as well as seeing if Sango and Miroku get better, and then how Inuyasha's going to react once he's revived!!

There's way too many loose ends you can't end it there!*whimper*

Besides i thought this was very well written, a good story line twist plot, and i really want to read more!!

Keep it up!!