First, let me say that I am not a fan of the first person perspective,BUT, this has truly touched my soul. It was just so beautifully captivating. I am in no way an English major or even minor and grammar, well, I know enough to get by. This, as far as I can tell was written exceptionally well. You took so much care in creating a warm, tender and loving transcipt of a woman with such love and devotion to one man/male that as it brought tears to his eyes, it did my own as well. It was so touching to know that he left life soon after she to be reunited for the rest of eternity together. You succeeded in what you wished to accomplish. Thank you! JEN

I loved it!! When a single tear fell from Sesshoumaru's eye it fell from mine too..the parts that were similar to the movie tied into the story in a great way!! This is getting added to my favorites! =D

Wow R0o great story. I've gotta say you put aces into places for the fic. I can see Kikyo as the who she represents, the geisha who lives the privellaged life yet longs for more. Poor Sessh. His soulmate is so close yet so far. I think that maybe the Shikon purified the demon babies. How sad. Awwww that is so sweet the reunited after death. Nice work on the story. I really liked how it was really long. I love a good long love story oneshot. Love the ending. I guess if it was meant to be and didn't happen in life it will happen in death. Good job R0o, watch out for the weird flamers XD *Huggles*