| I must admit that i don't give reviews to the stories that i read because i am lazy-even if the story impresses me with their talent for creative writing. But after reading your story of the blue-eyed Geisha, i cannot not leave a review. Despite some...I will not call them errors because I don't remember if they were, in fact errors, or if they were not befitting of my poor OCD ridden mind...but this story was beautiful. Your word choice, for the most part, was so fitting of the setting-of the world that you had created with talent; and your characterizing of Kagome and Sesshomaru were very well done.
I just wanted you to know that I, as one of your readers, see that you have great potential in writing and I thank you for writing this heart melting story.
| This story, is one of the very few that have made me cry. So sad yet so beautiful. I love it. Very talented writer you are.
lil phoenix child (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 May 2009
| I have read many many stories over the years but have left few reviews. Your story has touch me very deeply and made me cry. God has bless you with a wonderful gift. Use it to the fullest.
alissa (Chapter 1) - Wed 20 May 2009
| ok all i have to say is that i love the inuyasha seires and i adore memoirs of a geisha and you put the two togther perfectly! yes the story made me cry but in the best way possible. i think you did worderful in writing in 1st person and encourage you to write soom more.
gracy (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 May 2009
OH MY GOD!!!! It was so beautiful it made me cry! I loved it. I do think you are fantastic.... keep making them but do not kill them.. I am glad they had their happy ending!
rOo!! This is beautifully written! I love it!!! I see nothing wrong with it, neiter in syntax or grammer, you followed the 1st person point of view very well!!! I must say that at first when seeing it there on the page I was skeptical on reading it, but it was just sooo gooooooooddd when I did!!!! ^___^ >(^_^)<'s and props to the master!!!
Inulovely383 (Chapter 1) - Sun 10 May 2009
This story is perfection. It made me want to go out and rent "Memoirs of a Geisha" all over again...needless to say I cried like a baby. This was beautifully written and I, for one, will tell anyone I know to take the time to read this short story.
katlady (Chapter 1) - Sun 10 May 2009
wow good lemons great story...you should do a rencarnation one
nobo (Chapter 1) - Sun 10 May 2009
you have made me cry. What a beautiful and sad story. Your writing is always so awesome but thisone was jsut that much more. Just amazing.
Selah (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 May 2009
| Wow! I really liked it. You added bits and pieces from Memoirs of a Geisha, but still kept your story completely original. It was perfect to have a memoir of Kagome's be read by Sesshomaru, it somehow made it more realistic, it's memoirs of a geisha made to fit the relationship of Sesshomaru and Kagome.
Thankyou, I enjoyed it
| This was very well writen. a real tear jerker at the end i shed a couple of tears, first story to do that in a while. Very good i give you kudos for that! i really do like this fic, it was full of so many emotions that ... WOW, im stund. Very very good, and so well done.
Crises Core (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 May 2009
| Oh kami that was so depressing xD
I wanted to cry
You made this feel like i was really reading a memoir, good job x3
xoxoxo
Kit (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 May 2009
This was one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. I have read many a beautiful and moving fanfiction and none but this one has ever made me cry. It was very very well written.
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 May 2009
That was such an amazing and beautiful oneshot; honestly, it almost left me in tears it was that beautiful ---excellent job =)
Trugemini (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 May 2009
| r0o you did a beautiful job on this story in 1st person. The descriptions were not failing and you were able to convey the emotions felt at the time. Great Job girl!
xcc (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 May 2009
OMG! This story is amazing. I loved it. I'd read a few fanfics inspired in Memoirs of a Geisha, but this it's the best one ever.
At the end I even cried. It's the first time I did reading a story.
Thanks for sharing this.
darkmikochild (Chapter 1) - Fri 08 May 2009
O MY GOD I ABSOLUTLY LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE SOMETHING ELLS LIKE THIS. IT WAS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES AND ONE OF THE SWEETEST I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| I believe it was absolutely amazing. I love Memoirs of A Geisha and was amazed at how you were able to fit pieces in as well as fit in different characters of Inuyasha. It was sweet, romantic and loving as well as emotional. You did very, very well in capturing all of these emotions.
Words can't express the beauty of this story...it literally brought tears to my eyes (in a good way don't worry lol) I'm almost jealous you have such a way with words....I've been out of school for a while now that I've forgotten everything I learned in English class xDD (and my old 8th grade teacher even recommended me for an advanced English class before my mom said no to the high school I was supposed to go to and sent me to a private school out of my state) Anyway, I find it touching that even though Kagome wasn't Sesshomaru's "mate" or the Lady of the West that they still loved each other even after all that they've been through. It was sad to read Kagome couldn't bear his children but they still lived their lives to the fullest and died happy. Everything had a happy end for them. This is a wonderful story great job rOo. I hope to read more of your stories in the future. Keep up the good work!
LC Rose (Chapter 1) - Fri 08 May 2009
| ROo, you know I loved this. And you know the story you wrote kept sweeping me away. I found nothing wrong with your 1st person POV writing (and I agree that it's hard to do). Your descriptions were fantastic and, as I loved MoaG the book, I think you did it well. I'm sorry LC cannot offer much a critique, but I've been pouring over it long enough already. :-)
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