ahhh.. hahahahaha ^_^
Just hilarious. Your characterizations are spot on. You have an uncanny knack with one liners -- in fact, I'd say you're probably one of the better comedic writers I've read. My personal favorite for this most recent chapter: "Well, it's a funny story, actually. You see, there was this tortoise and this hare, and my eldest brother told me that he would bet his summer palace that the tortoise could outrace the hare. So, naturally I took the bet; who had ever heard of a tortoise outrunning a hare? But it turns out that the hare was quite fond of naps and the tortoise was exceptionally motivated..." Brilliant.
Amy (Chapter 5) - Sun 03 May 2009
OH NOES! No more chapters! Post more!
Amy (Chapter 4) - Sun 03 May 2009
haha i loved the chap. it was funny how she thought she was going crazy
Amy (Chapter 3) - Sun 03 May 2009
Uh oh! She's gonna hav to marry that god person?
Amy (Chapter 2) - Sun 03 May 2009
Good chapter I like how you don't make Inuyasha a big jerk like a lot of stories
Amy (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 May 2009
This is really good! I love it!
Seems like a promising story. Loved the very beginning and how you portray the characters. Keep it up! :)
BennaBear (Chapter 4) - Sat 02 May 2009
That is a very interesting story!
Very unique plot i really like it! I hope you will be updating really soon
Noacat (Chapter 4) - Sat 02 May 2009
It was me that left the empty review. Sorry 'bout that. My finger slipped before I log in and things happened and here we are.
Anyway, I loved this chapter. Hilarious and brilliant. My final thought about this chapter -- Higurashi Kagome: Marriage Councelor.
Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Sat 02 May 2009
Micah caran Damien (Chapter 3) - Fri 01 May 2009
Oh wait, no. I re-read the description. Not InuTaisho.
Micah caran Damien (Chapter 3) - Fri 01 May 2009
I think it's Inu no Taisho. Arrogant like Sesshomaru brash and demanding like Inuyasha? Gotta be their dad. I like this! Update soon.
Instyle (Chapter 3) - Fri 01 May 2009
Hey! Great Story keep on writing. I'm excited to find out what will happen next.
Jill Dozer (Chapter 3) - Fri 01 May 2009
It's a great story so far, Kagome is so going to be pissed at the god when he finally lets her down.
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