I continue to be amused and entertained! I love how you have Kagome throwing rocks at Izanagi! That is sooooo Kagome. You really have her characeter down pat. I also loved that she asked Izanagi to scare Sesshoumaru a bit. I knew she had a mean streak in her! Izanagi does seem a bit out there at times, but I guess after the eons begin piling up on you your bound to become a little crazy. I also think it's great that Kagome immediately got into Sesshoumaru's face for trying to kill her again.

Oh this is good! I can't wait to see what happens when they threaten Sesshoumaru! Kagome's kimono sounds beautiful. I can imagine what she looked like when in it. Her helping THE GOD to get back his woman? That is sooooo Kagome. Ever the matchmaker! I love her rant at the beginning where she's contemplating setting him on fire! She certainly has a temper. I also like her wandering thoughts while she's being kidnapped. Again, very funny. Will you explain later on why Kagome didn't die when Izanagi came to earth? He said that most people's hearts stop or they turn to goo so I'm just wondering why Kagome is still alive? Or is it just another one of her special talents?

This made my WHOLE day! Kagome and Sesshoumaru are so flipping hilarious. I almost feel sad for him... almost. It's too funny and amusing and I would gladly waste a few minutes of my life to read this.

You really have a knack for description. That's true talent. Not many writers can't paint pictures with words like you do so congratulations! This chapter was so wonderful! I love where this story is going and it's really hard for me stop reading to leave a review before heading off to the next chapter, but your story is so brilliant I would feel ashamed not to leave some input. I don't think I've mentioned it before now but other than the occasional grammar mistake (which we all have, me being no different) you have remarkable writing skills. I love when I'm not constantly stumbling over bad grammar during a story! So thanks for that. Now as for the chapter itself....WOW! When Kagome was getting bad vibes in the last chapter I was thinking maybe she'll get sealed on the other side, maybe she'll get thrown back into an earlier time, maybe Naraku had found a way to the future, or something along those lines. Kagome ending up with a God and him kidnapping her to be his wife? Nope. Never crossed my mind. Way to surprise me! I really liked Kagome's responses in this chapter. They were just....so Kagome. Her being beligerant to a being that could quite literally snuff out her life, her telling him to keep his eyes to himself, and her denying him like she did? All completely in character and very realistic. This line is an absolute fav of mine "She knew it was useless, obviously the big joke that was her life would not be complete until she was kidnapped by a hentai god. She should have expected it really." I was laughing so hard I was crying! Simply wonderful! I loved this chapter and now I'm on to the next!

Wow you're only 17? That blows me away! You write beautifully! I don't hold a candle to your talent. You should think of writing professionally. Anyways, I absolutely ADORED this chapter! The beginning was so hilarious! I was rolling. I could see the scene you described perfectly in my head! Rin all curious, Jaken sputtering, and Sesshoumaru amused at Jaken's dilemma. Oh it was too good! The legend was artistic. I've never heard of it, but now I'm definately going to look into it. I love how Sesshoumaru viewed things in this chapter. Speaking of inconveniences and such. It's a little harsh about him not willing to give his life for Rin, but I think he's just fooling himself. The fact that he's going to traipse across Japan to find a demon that MIGHT end up being a threat to Rin shows that. I also like how you ended his scene with him enjoying melting things and how it puts him in a good mood. Way to interject some humor into the story. You really have Sesshoumaru's character down pat. I've never really been one for OOC Sesshoumaru. So kudos for having such a handle on him in this story. I'm liking how you're setting up the relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome. The indecision between the two of them. How well they know each other. I see some major heartbreak for one if not both of them in the future. Well, that's it for now. On to the next chapter!

I'm definately intrigued. You've started to lay the ground work for the story very well. I like the interaction you have between Inuyasha's pack and the way Jaken and Rin behave towards one another. In each scene you have managed to settle each character into their personality with ease. Very nice. You've got Miroku with his poise and lecherous thoughts. Sango with her battle talent and shyness about her feelings. Inuyasha is of course his overbearing hard ass self, and then there's Kagome. I love the way you introduced her. The opening of this chapter was brilliantly done. Humorous and informative all at once. Good job. I love how you have Jaken lamenting his lot in life, wondering why his lord has subjected him to such a fate. Funny. Then Rin? Oh I can't wait for her to ask why the woman's belly was swollen! Anyways, good chapter and now I'm on to the next. Sincerely, Texanlady

Well, pooh, I was expecting a bigger blowout when Sesshoumaru finally found out WHY she wanted to help the god so bad and it resulting in him helping a god.

Their interaction if absolutely halarious, I look forward to the next update.

i like it.. lol i especialy like kagomes thoughs lol. please update soon cant wait for mext chapter! ")

Okay, all caught up and I'm as entranced as ever! This story is fantastic with its telling and Sesshoumaru is so in character it is hillarious. I am loving Kagome's character as well. God I wish there was more, but I shall just have to be patient. Wonderful job and I shall recommend this. Now hurry up and get to the part with your forum quote in it! :-)

"He was not an expert on the stages of ningen child rearing, but he was positive she had to be a little more...tall-ish, or something, before this particular life lesson was learned." LMAO! Excellent. Sesshoumaru almost smirked, the prospect of melting things always put him in a good mood. If I could do it, it would put me in a good mood, too!

Your forum signature made me curious, at first. And then the more I read it, the more I wanted to read MORE of it. And so I sought the fic out! And if your forum signature brought me here, your writing is keeping me from hitting the back button. I love the descriptions and the humor. Now on to the next chapter!

nooo it was getting interesting darn sigh well then keep up the greatwork i hope you update soon ^_^