That was short and sweet.  I liked that last line; as if you get the feeling that Kagome was debating whether or not to forgive him after he got drenched, but then she decided to take pity on him.   It was well written, too; very few typos.

I really liked this. Especially the ending. It wasn't typical Sesshoumaru but I would like to think you might act different trying to get the love of your life back. You had a few grammar issues but overall not too bad. Perfect for Valentine's Day.

I liked it.  At first I thought Sesshoumaru was a bit ooc but, after I thought about it awhile, I could see why he would be so humble, considering the circumstances.  He really messed up.  You did an excellent job of expressing his emotions, very descriptive.

For me the song lyrics inserted throughout the story were distracting and unnecessary.  You told the story in such a way that it was perfectly clear what had happened, why and Sesshoumaru's deep regret, without the embellishment of the lyrics.  

That being said, I admit, I'm not a big fan of song fics.  If lyrics are added my preference is either at the beginning or end of the story.  Note, it's my preference and doesn't have to be done that way.

Well done.

I generally stay away from song-fics, but this one was good. I don't think it needed the song though. This is the perfect, overly sappy thing to read right around Valentine's Day. There was a little bit of rambling and grammatical problems, but overall, nice.

i think this turned out just fine, there were a few gramatical issues, but nothing serious, you did a fine job and i hope you continue with it :D

I am no fan of song fics but your story was heartwarming and touching enough that it didn't need the lyrics. There's a distinct lack of punctuation and some grammar issues and run-on sentences. You went from present to past tense within the same sentence it totally messes with the word flow. Even if this story is AU, Sess's character is very OOC and you never explain the backstory or the breakup from Kagome's perspective. With a little work this could go from "Crawling back to you" to "As long as you love me"

Needs a bit of work, few gammar mistakes, OOC is a bit too much, and truthfully I think it would be better if you take out the song lyrics, you still get the point across, but the lyrics just mess up your flow.  A few too many sentences start with 'he' or 'his', and so the story doesn't flow as well as it should.  If you add more back story or more details in what you have, it can go a long way to improving this story, helping it to reach its potental.